E X P I - A line rider anniversary track by Pure5152

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wRt2IB7pIY4



youtube description:

expi
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yes... my anniversary track is finally here... and it's here early.. sorry for that guys.. my actual anniversary is on august 31.
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statistics:
total line count: 1992 (1669 blue, 215 red, 108 green)
approximate track length: 1:30 seconds (90 seconds)
approximate time taken: 1 week (about 6-7 hours in total)
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Inspirations: Flagcapper / SCG / the idea of "integration"
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songs:
1. Sound of infinity - F-777 by: Jesse Valentine (F-777)
- http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/258437 -
- http://f-777.newgrounds.com/audio/ -

2. Reasoner- Ticking Away by: Reasoner
- http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/171605 -
- http://reasoner.newgrounds.com/audio/ -
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like always.. feedback is always appreciated
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I'm sorry If I didn't mention you in the shouts... :\
but thanks for helping me have a great year on youtube guys.
-pure

wow.....one of the most epic tracks i'v seen in a bit. had some good recycling and the highspeed part was nice. i really can't find anything i didn't like with it so great job!

I was really confused while watching this track. Yea it had some cool stuff in there, but it was pulled off nubishly. Flatriding = noplz.

Overall, i thought it was good but at the same time "meh"

Oh be quiet Inu, the flatsledding was fine.
You did better than I could, so you have some potential IMO.

thanks commandercoke

If you look at the specific tricks and what you did, this is very good. However, it lacked originality, and some parts were slightly sloppy. Nothing to cry over, but could use some work. You should spend more time coming up with tricks and less time copying others IMO

Keep in mind that the neatest flings are every other frame! Your flings were extremely messy, and I think making the wells every other frame might help, although it doesn't end there. Your wells are also extremely weak. Just because you make a well and he doesn't die, doesn't mean you have to keep it.
As for alt flings, I don't think you should even be trying them until you can make your wells more powerful. =/

Your curves were a little shakey, you should probably even them out if you want to continue with manuals and flatsledding.
And Inu, geez, my next track has HEADRIDING in it, not to mention flatsledding. Things are changing, bud.

Also, just in general, work on your flow. Insert airtime when it works, otherwise don't. You had some really unnecessary airtimes in there that really made it impossible for your track to get into a rhythm, and getting into a rhythm is what you're aiming for. If you can do it really well, music syncing is a snap, because your brain automatically puts stuff in the right place for music syncs
So yeah, you'll know when you get into a rhythm.

Hedgehogs4Me wrote:Keep in mind that the neatest flings are every other frame! Your flings were extremely messy, and I think making the wells every other frame might help, although it doesn't end there. Your wells are also extremely weak. Just because you make a well and he doesn't die, doesn't mean you have to keep it.
As for alt flings, I don't think you should even be trying them until you can make your wells more powerful. =/

Your curves were a little shakey, you should probably even them out if you want to continue with manuals and flatsledding.
And Inu, geez, my next track has HEADRIDING in it, not to mention flatsledding. Things are changing, bud.

Also, just in general, work on your flow. Insert airtime when it works, otherwise don't. You had some really unnecessary airtimes in there that really made it impossible for your track to get into a rhythm, and getting into a rhythm is what you're aiming for. If you can do it really well, music syncing is a snap, because your brain automatically puts stuff in the right place for music syncs
So yeah, you'll know when you get into a rhythm.

I agree with all that, but I might also it that its a neat track and not one of those lame short quirky tracks with techno music
good job

I really like how I'm being attacked for giving my opinion. I'll stick to what I said, oldf** coming through.

I thought it was really good for being made in a week. Wish i knew how to do hand flings and such.

Inukaza wrote:oldf** coming through.

newf** , i respect your opinion, but as hedge said, things are changing buddy =/

good track, but its sloppy and has weak wells (i make tons of them so dont be ashamed )

I didn't mean to ATTACK you
It just seems kinda silly to say "No matter what the situation is, doing ___ sucks", you know?

Hedge pretty much said everything

Although I wowed @ the granual @ 1:39, I don't know why

You had some really nice stuff in there,
to make your wells stronger, try stacking wells!
(watch aspi's tutorial to find out what stacking is)