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Experiment, part 4

Post by rabid squirrel on Tue Jan 26, 2016 2:08 pm

Feedback and constructive criticism appreciated

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Re: Experiment, part 4

Post by Z_N-Freak on Tue Jan 26, 2016 3:06 pm

WHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! I'm laughing out loud here, this is pure genius Very Happy

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Re: Experiment, part 4

Post by efrazable on Tue Jan 26, 2016 3:18 pm

You're improving really fast! The smooth curves were great, and I loved the personality from the embedded text in the track.

Needs an all boing boing section tho

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Re: Experiment, part 4

Post by Chuggers on Tue Jan 26, 2016 3:44 pm

the penguins took this from an 8/10 to a 12/10, good job on that

i just realized, this track is missing papyrus font title cards, with each letter a different size than the last
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Re: Experiment, part 4

Post by Conundrumer on Tue Jan 26, 2016 4:01 pm


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Re: Experiment, part 4

Post by Yobanjojoe on Wed Jan 27, 2016 1:40 am


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Re: Experiment, part 4

Post by Fauxfyre on Wed Jan 27, 2016 2:32 am

Wait Rabid made a fling and it's after 2009?

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Re: Experiment, part 4

Post by Sheldon on Wed Jan 27, 2016 3:59 am

Make a sequel. 10/10 would bang.
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Re: Experiment, part 4

Post by Fauxfyre on Wed Jan 27, 2016 4:01 am

@Sheldon wrote:Make a sequel. 10/10 would bang.
Or get banged by

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Re: Experiment, part 4

Post by Sheldon on Wed Jan 27, 2016 4:05 am

@Fauxfyre wrote:
@Sheldon wrote:Make a sequel. 10/10 would bang.
Or get banged by
I prefer to provide the bang.
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Re: Experiment, part 4

Post by Lukking on Wed Jan 27, 2016 5:32 am

I bang to provide the prefer

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Re: Experiment, part 4

Post by SPL4SHZ0N3 on Wed Jan 27, 2016 7:41 am

pinch loop would be really cool to see, i wonder why no one's really done that before...

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Re: Experiment, part 4

Post by anton on Wed Jan 27, 2016 10:39 am

Track needs an intro. I am thinking bold comic sans, underlined.

Improving rapidly though. Only part I would change is the offsled part. I don't know about everyone else, but I am not a fan. Keep it up

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Re: Experiment, part 4

Post by Conundrumer on Wed Jan 27, 2016 2:12 pm

CRAWL. MANUAL.

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Re: Experiment, part 4

Post by ScrungleBlumpkus on Wed Jan 27, 2016 8:54 pm

OH MY GOD THAT IS A GENIUS CONCEPT
You're doing heavily synced OFFSLED! So fucking cool to waaaatch! and the zooming in sync was cool, too. I love you, and I feel like this is like a reference to that one offsled similar to this that had a sudden metal screaming band in the background. It makes me think that these experiments have been like important track references, like each one is going to be one track in the exceptional playlist and you're only capturing one element of it but it's clearly relevant and it's all tied together to each interesting track, like you're highlighting the inventiveness of each track


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