Experiment, part 1
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Experiment, part 1
Feedback and constructive criticism appreciated
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9-BgOLDarPw
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9-BgOLDarPw
Re: Experiment, part 1
Nice shoulder fling. The curve was terrible though. I know you can do better than that curve, so I needn't give any constructive criticism because you know how to improve that. Stall was pretty cool I suppose.
Re: Experiment, part 1
The longest part of the track was the head fling, which does feel very haphazard. If you commit to the trick from the beginning you might get a more desired result.
Opal Rider- Moderator
- Aestetikally appealing
Re: Experiment, part 1
I'm not sure exactly what you were experimenting with here.
theacp127- Member
- trying real hard
Re: Experiment, part 1
Hm. My first impression was that it's a very interesting idea, to have a stationary LR track of sorts. For me at least, it encouraged a vigilant rewatch.
My second impression was that it wasn't interesting. It would be hard to control such a track.
My third impression is that I think this would go very well with nature background noises, like rain or crashing waves or whatnot. For a sort of meditative state expressed through LR.
My second impression was that it wasn't interesting. It would be hard to control such a track.
My third impression is that I think this would go very well with nature background noises, like rain or crashing waves or whatnot. For a sort of meditative state expressed through LR.
Re: Experiment, part 1
I don't claim to know what you are trying to convey. Yet.
ScrungleBlumpkus- Member
- Interior Crocodile Alligator
Re: Experiment, part 1
I feel like this track is an attempt to examine how we respond to tracks as a community, though I could be way off the mark here. This track does make me think about long stalls and the possibility of presenting them well in this medium. Interesting. Looking forward to part 2 (if it exists).
OTDE- Administrator
- the postham mindset
Re: Experiment, part 1
Still I'm not quite sure what kind of feedback or constructive criticism you would want. If would argue that there isn't anything here to criticize or give feedback on. If you explain what you "experimented" with it could help so people are shooting the dark trying to sound artsy.rabid squirrel wrote:Feedback and constructive criticism appreciated
theacp127- Member
- trying real hard
Re: Experiment, part 1
The track is a discussion of moral nihilism, also known as ethical nihilism, where the meta-ethical view that morality does not exist as something inherent to objective reality; therefore no action is necessarily preferable to any other, that there is no morality at all, but that if it does exist, it is a human construction and thus artificial, wherein any and all meaning is relative for different possible outcomes. In this way a moral nihilist believes that all moral claims are void of any truth value. An alternative scholarly perspective is that moral nihilism is a morality in itself.
Re: Experiment, part 1
If this is an experiment, then I guess I can't really offer constructive criticism until I know what goal you were trying to accomplish. I could say that I enjoyed the shoulder stuff at the beginning, but other than that I didn't enjoy much of the rest of the track, but I have a feeling that entertaining me wasn't the goal. If your goal was trying something new or simply having fun, whether it worked or not I hope you got closer to reaching the outcome you want.
shiny- Member
Re: Experiment, part 1
If OTDE is right, i am slightly annoyed with him for pointing it out for everybody
anton- Member
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