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Post by SETH Sun Aug 07, 2011 1:28 pm

hi all ! here is my new unscenery track! i'm not good for trackmaking , but this time I try to make good tricks and nice stuff Very Happy

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=46mmKP-OFR0



thanks for watching !
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Post by Derpinator Sun Aug 07, 2011 2:00 pm

Recording wasnt very good Very Happy

The flings was also sorta weak and the wells close to each other.

you tricked me so hard at 0:35 xD
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Post by Sssschiller Sun Aug 07, 2011 2:07 pm

Had a oldschool feeling. Also try not only to learn new tricks but some smoothness Wink

and for better recording check this out...it helped me Wink
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FcOPi0HYwSY&feature=channel_video_title
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Post by Inukaza Sun Aug 07, 2011 2:26 pm

I thought one of the good things with the track was it's misdirection stuff. You tricked me a few times.

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Post by Cereal Sun Aug 07, 2011 2:39 pm

Recording was really choppy, look at aspi's recording tutorial for perfect recording Wink

It was pretty good, especially near the end. The flow was better than I expected, and it was pretty misdirectional. Just work on smoother and more evenly pressured manuals.
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Post by linerage Sun Aug 07, 2011 2:41 pm

considering how you're a new track maker and everything, this track completely blew me away. Good job! Just make the flings stronger, or find stronger combinations.
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Post by -Nexus- Mon Aug 08, 2011 9:33 pm

What linerage said.
Yeah that wasn't bad you're getting seriously better, I'd say keep working on your flow and the most basic tricks so you can make everything look better even if you can't do a lot of trick variation Very Happy
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Post by CamQuartr Mon Aug 08, 2011 10:20 pm

First thing first, work on recording Wink

second, It seams like you have a decent idea on how quirk works, (or you got pretty darn lucky lol), so work on the spacing of your gwells and work on making them stronger

third, make your manuals a bit more circular and smooth.

4th, other wise it was pretty good Very Happy, keep it up!

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Post by Sheldon Mon Aug 08, 2011 10:57 pm

Well, I completely expected the song.
The flings, alot of those lines seemed useless because of there closeness. Work on that. Use a recording tutorial next time. Other than that great track for a new guy, keep it up and you will be a great quirker one day. Smile
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Post by SETH Tue Aug 09, 2011 8:16 am

thanks for your comment, I knew my track was not good, but it was like a test, now I keep my big track, this time in my field, scenery Very Happy

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Post by boom12n Tue Aug 09, 2011 10:28 am

good job Smile some of the wells were a bit close together and some were weak but you got me a few times with the misdirection, and don't say your track wasn't good, because it was good Smile
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