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SETH - Over High

Post by SETH on Wed Aug 08, 2012 10:53 pm

hi, here's my latest track, it's a short track because im' pretty busy and not very motivate for a full lenght track.
I do my best, and it's all ^^

http://youtu.be/GAytpxKuG4E

edit: omg I don't see the render , too motion blur, i dunno what do

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Post by Inukaza on Wed Aug 08, 2012 11:08 pm

What program do you use? Maybe I could help with your motion blur issue.

Aside from that, I'm conflicted. Your well placement is horrid, sorry to say. But you seam to be able to do ton of the advance tricks. I don't know what to say other than make it stronger and cleaner.

Looks like you gave up at the end because you got too fast. You should keep on working on it to practice.

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Post by Sssschiller on Thu Aug 09, 2012 6:16 am

Ooooh, The Devil Wears Prada in color replay <3 awesome Very Happy

(I'm working on our track, buddy)

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Post by Helios Pavonine on Thu Aug 09, 2012 6:31 am

I really enjoyed that Very Happy Wtf-shoulder fling ftw.

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Post by SETH on Thu Aug 09, 2012 9:35 am

@Sssschiller wrote:Ooooh, The Devil Wears Prada in color replay <3 awesome Very Happy

(I'm working on our track, buddy)


yeah tdwp is i think my favorite band,

thx for comment and advice guys

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Post by rabid squirrel on Thu Aug 09, 2012 10:21 am

basically what Inu said, but I just want want to say it was short but quite entertaining!

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Re: SETH - Over High

Post by Se7eN on Thu Aug 09, 2012 11:48 am

Woo! Great Music Choices!

Good stuff in the track too!

EDIT: All G-well?

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Re: SETH - Over High

Post by [senpai] kevans on Thu Aug 09, 2012 1:25 pm

Wow, I was a little disappointed that it wasn't finished, but overall, great track.

7/10
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Re: SETH - Over High

Post by Fauxfyre on Thu Aug 09, 2012 1:54 pm

The motion blur really bothers me, and the non-stall bothers me (I could tell you were syncing it to the music, but it wasn't obvious at first. Perhaps let the music and fall go on a little longer after the ending.) Overall with the track, I am rather impressed. Too much downwards movement, but the track looked real cool otherwise

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Re: SETH - Over High

Post by SETH on Thu Aug 09, 2012 5:49 pm

thx for comment guys, and yes i have more practiced the trick than the flow, it juste cause i prefer great trick xD

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