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J.R. Track Stuff

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Post by JuvenileReckus Sun Oct 09, 2016 3:53 pm

New stuff

Tidbit 7 - Xeron 1.2:
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Post by Apple Sun Oct 09, 2016 4:14 pm

Looking good. I like circly-roundy tracks like that.
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Post by JuvenileReckus Sun Oct 23, 2016 2:12 pm

Big edit

Tidbit 8 - Xeron 1.3:
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Post by JuvenileReckus Thu Oct 27, 2016 9:21 pm

Another big edit

Tidbit 9 - Xeron 1.4:

Need some critiques please
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Post by theacp127 Fri Oct 28, 2016 1:55 am

Well, I the first thing I notice is that your curves are not evenly pressured. This is what makes making manuals a bit more difficult because it causes Bosh to lose balance faster. Think about making the curves more rounded like a circle, and that should help a lot.
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Post by Sheldon Fri Oct 28, 2016 11:02 am

Curves look like your pressure is inconsistent this is easily fixed. If you are going for that kudos, you did it right. If you would like me to teach you how I make manuals I'd be glad to teach you. Feel free to add me on skype: paco4tacopuffs
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Post by rabid squirrel Fri Oct 28, 2016 1:05 pm

It's basically impossible to give constructive feedback on a screenshot of an unscened track - Line Rider is a medium almost solely based on movement, unless you're making scenery.
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Post by JuvenileReckus Sat Nov 12, 2016 10:49 pm

Ever heard of a red herring?
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