Linerider Reflection

There were a lot of pretty good areas in the fling quirk section!

The alt bits had a few dead spots and were repetitive at points, try not to rely on shoulder stacks all the time to get out of places or gain speed.


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This was pretty enjoyable! Although most of it was relatively weak (which is not entirely a bad thing), I really loved the alt quirk; I was pleasantly surprised at how misdirectional and unpredictable it was. You kept me hooked throughout, props

It was very floaty. For the style type, I noticed not very much rotation, which can really help improve the overall floaty style. Video editing was good, but for me the music didn't fit this track. Overall not a bad track, but could use a few tweaks to make it a better track/video.

So things that always bother me:

• You're always doing very similar things, or at least they look similar because they are lulzy and messy.
  
• Follow through with at least one decent trick per track please, you never seem to make anything but evolving flings and barrel rolls. For heavens sake, make a full fling or manual
  
• Your alt quirk is slower and weaker than what is expected of that style.
  
• Your editing is good but recording could be zoomed in more to make the alt quirk not seem as slow when it is way zoomed out.
  
• Your response to criticism is really bad. You ask for feedback, but then don't take the time to process it and just fight back against it, so you should either be content with silence or accept what is given to you, whether it is good or bad.
  

The reason you don't get many comments is people don't want to get in arguments about posting excessively negative comments. But since you are begging for comments in the chat atm and are really asking for a verbal beating like this, here it is. Everyone can hate on me for this, but Stallie was literally asking for it, so here ya go.

Mmmhh, the track had an interesting flow I think you have to make your wells a little bit stronger, because you build in a lot of stops. To be honest, I've seen better work from you But maybe it's just the zooming. In my opinion it's way to far zoomed out.

It felt to me like there may have been a few missed opportunities for a good transition that you missed in order to do a trick that was maybe a bit more challenging in that particular area. I think the biggest thing here would be to say that knowledge is figuring out how to do the tricks. Wisdom is learning when to use them. Although it wasn't a bad track in the least, and the fling quirk area did certainly have its moments.

^ That totally made my day hahahaha.

I'll post something about the track later.