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Post by Sheldon Sun Aug 14, 2011 8:17 pm

NOW UP
Comments are greatly appretiated
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AE3G3YgO05Q

Attempt at a style based manual track. Under the influence of Georgio_jc, Votale and 1473.
Thanks for watching 8D.


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Post by Inukaza Sun Aug 14, 2011 8:20 pm

The green lines made it so much more unimpressive. That being said, it didn't do much for me. It's a cool concept, but I believe you should take it up the next level and not trick everyone. (By that, I mean the gaps of green lines where you did intergration.) I know it was few, but still.


Also, what it the linecount, looks like you used the pen tool at some points. xD


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Post by Cereal Sun Aug 14, 2011 10:35 pm

It was pretty incredible how everything "fit together" so nicely. You use extremely small lines in your manuals, which is alright I guess. You also did a great job hiding your wells. Wink

I noticed that you didn't add any credits, but the song sounded like it was form Mikeee, and the editing looked like it was from OTDE. :P
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Post by Sheldon Sun Aug 14, 2011 10:42 pm

Song was from mikeee. The extremely small lines is actually double lining for rotation lol. Thanks cereal. And @ inukaza, its 1800. Those curves as I said are double lined at points. And the green lines were mostly a visual thing.


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Post by rabid squirrel Sun Aug 14, 2011 10:54 pm

Dude, that was beastly! I had to watch the color replay to see how some of that stuff worked, and I'm still a little baffled by some of it. Awesome concept, awesome vision, and awesome execution while keeping it extremely entertaining.

I think you're becoming one of the most versatile trackmakers out there.

and cool, mikeee wrote that song? I liked it and I usually hate rap :P

EDIT: green lines didn't bother me at all, don't see why anyone would have any beef with them after Flashkick.


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Post by GhostY Sun Aug 14, 2011 10:59 pm

that was so awesome :O

super sexy flow and confuzzling parts = epic ;D
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Post by Se7eN Sun Aug 14, 2011 11:20 pm

That was awesome. I think this is my new favorite track.

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Post by linerage Mon Aug 15, 2011 12:09 am

so chill. good job :3
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Post by Derpinator Mon Aug 15, 2011 2:59 am

there was like a doublepathed integration

it was very smooth

nice track! Very Happy
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Post by Z_N-Freak Mon Aug 15, 2011 4:53 am

I like this man. Don't listen to the green-line haters, I think it's awesome that they are used like this. It makes tracks look smoother and can give that nice suprise element you have going on here too. Really digging them manuals, keep up the good work! =)
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Post by Helios Pavonine Mon Aug 15, 2011 6:13 am

Very funky, groovy and smoooooth track man. I like the integration, despite the green lines.

Also, the song fit really well :P
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Post by automatizer Mon Aug 15, 2011 9:30 am

extremely awsom beastly track bro!
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Post by Commandercoke Mon Aug 15, 2011 11:05 am

This is a crazy-cool track. It is so deceiving and gorgeous. The curves in this put me into a trance of sorts. Wonderful choice in music and name as well.
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Post by efrazable Mon Aug 15, 2011 11:09 am

I approve. No... Something better than approval... true love? Inverted Onoz

Now I dare you to an entire track in a kramual. :|
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Post by Votale Mon Aug 15, 2011 12:53 pm

Very creative and cool :P

I don't know why green lines would bother people. As long as they're used creatively like you did here, I like them 8D
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Post by pure5152 Mon Aug 15, 2011 4:34 pm

so badass.

my new favorite track style, and one of my favorite tracks xD
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Post by Sheldon Mon Aug 15, 2011 6:06 pm

Thanks votale and pure Smile.
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