Valance- Sheldon
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Valance- Sheldon
Please take the time to give me feedback I really appreciate that. ^^
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My all gwell track I have been working on for quite some time. It is dedicated to aspi33. He inspired me to make this. Also SPL4SHZ0NE, my best friend in LR. Thanks for encouragement. I made a non-contact foot fling loop. First and only other one was made in 2008 by kcbm. Thanks for watching. Also I believe the groll after the long foot fling is the fastest ever made. The really long foot fling is a foot/ other foot asdf. Thanks to SonofTheLuster for editing.
For the record the title was supposed to be Valence, but there was an error somewhere. Now the name means a type of drapery.
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My all gwell track I have been working on for quite some time. It is dedicated to aspi33. He inspired me to make this. Also SPL4SHZ0NE, my best friend in LR. Thanks for encouragement. I made a non-contact foot fling loop. First and only other one was made in 2008 by kcbm. Thanks for watching. Also I believe the groll after the long foot fling is the fastest ever made. The really long foot fling is a foot/ other foot asdf. Thanks to SonofTheLuster for editing.
For the record the title was supposed to be Valence, but there was an error somewhere. Now the name means a type of drapery.
Last edited by Sheldon on Tue Jul 12, 2011 10:44 pm; edited 4 times in total
Re: Valance- Sheldon
wow that was amazing, it reminded me so much of aspi
i loved that fling @ 0:39, in fact i loved the whole thing <3
i loved that fling @ 0:39, in fact i loved the whole thing <3
GhostY- Member
Re: Valance- Sheldon
Around :50 I said to myself in amazement, "WHAT" and went to rewatch it before I even finished. That's how amazed I was. Amazing.
lol
For the record the title was supposed to be Valence, but there was an error somewhere. Now the name means a type of drapery. :|
lol
Inukaza- Member
Re: Valance- Sheldon
And I feel like I'm gonna be the only one saying I didn't like it.
Although I have to say it was technically one of the best tracks I've seen in quite a while, it was utterly boring to watch as it had almost no airtime whatsoever, making it unbelievably predictable.
Sorry, Sheldon... Not my cup of tea. Good job on the technical side of it, though. =)
EDIT in italic.
Although I have to say it was technically one of the best tracks I've seen in quite a while, it was utterly boring to watch as it had almost no airtime whatsoever, making it unbelievably predictable.
Sorry, Sheldon... Not my cup of tea. Good job on the technical side of it, though. =)
EDIT in italic.
Jam- Member
Re: Valance- Sheldon
Absolutely amazing amount of technical ability. A great watch, especially in slow-mo.
Re: Valance- Sheldon
That was amazing, dude you are a G well geinuis, the strenght of your flings is very good and it had nice flow too.
Stallie- Member
Re: Valance- Sheldon
Your gravitational skills are awesome, Sheldon. I was really surprised to see a 2nd position feet loop. But, I didn't like it...
It was just fling, fling, short (not more than 1080º, and most were under 360º) groll, fling, fling, fling, loop, fling, etc. The speed was also really constant which I totally wouldn't recommend if you're making a track where you don't do any manuals/quirky curves/flatsledding/flanuals or any of that. This might sound really ironic coming from me, but speed isn't always a good thing. There was also only one instant of airtime which, IMO, was unnecessarily long and killed the flow. And another thing that bothered me was that you made a track that was 1:20 long and it didn't contain a single non-directional (the direction doesn't change by it) alt fling. Take a look at the non-technical side of Levitation.
It was just fling, fling, short (not more than 1080º, and most were under 360º) groll, fling, fling, fling, loop, fling, etc. The speed was also really constant which I totally wouldn't recommend if you're making a track where you don't do any manuals/quirky curves/flatsledding/flanuals or any of that. This might sound really ironic coming from me, but speed isn't always a good thing. There was also only one instant of airtime which, IMO, was unnecessarily long and killed the flow. And another thing that bothered me was that you made a track that was 1:20 long and it didn't contain a single non-directional (the direction doesn't change by it) alt fling. Take a look at the non-technical side of Levitation.
Rafael- Line Rider Legend
Re: Valance- Sheldon
this is probably my favorite type of track to watch (and make) and enjoyed every second of it.
SethComposerGuy- Line Rider Legend
Re: Valance- Sheldon
Oh my. That was very enjoyable. I expected more airtime in certain parts, but all flings were so clean and well-executed I didn't think about it anymore.
Hat's off to that foot fling loop
Hat's off to that foot fling loop
Helios Pavonine- Member
Re: Valance- Sheldon
pardon? are you in your right state of mind sir?Jam wrote:Although I have to say it was technically one of the best tracks I've seen in quite a while, it was utterly boring to watch as it had almost no airtime whatsoever, making it unbelievably predictable.
KillinTime2792- Member
Re: Valance- Sheldon
Yeah, I am. Boring track to watch in a video. Impressive in fully zoomed in slow motion, but it doesn't make it fun to watch.KillinTime2792 wrote:pardon? are you in your right state of mind sir?Jam wrote:Although I have to say it was technically one of the best tracks I've seen in quite a while, it was utterly boring to watch as it had almost no airtime whatsoever, making it unbelievably predictable.
Jam- Member
Re: Valance- Sheldon
Wow, you have amazing control with gravity.
I noticed a kcbm/no contact point foot fling in thar! You're the 2nd person to ever do one of those. 0:50 was just dead sexy.
The only problem was that the recording was kind of choppy...
I noticed a kcbm/no contact point foot fling in thar! You're the 2nd person to ever do one of those. 0:50 was just dead sexy.
The only problem was that the recording was kind of choppy...
Cereal- Line Rider Legend
Re: Valance- Sheldon
A couple things,in my opinion it was kinda boring.Still a great track with great gravity control and some sexy tricks The reason it's boring is it would slow down for 3 seconds speed up for 5 and keep doing the same thing for part of the track.Overall pretty amazing track.Still faved!
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Great variety of flings and I loved the control over bosh ^^
In my opinion it WAS enjoyable to watch maily because I liked the control of bosh through the flings
In my opinion it WAS enjoyable to watch maily because I liked the control of bosh through the flings
Wolf_Spirit- Member
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Re: Valance- Sheldon
screw the "fling after fling after fling" talk (is my opinion). I enjoyed every single second of it. The way you manipulate bosh to tumble and rotate, fling this way and that, and speed and slow down is breathtaking.
Happy 3 year anni You never cease to destroy me (e.g. mind blown, jaw's gone)
Happy 3 year anni You never cease to destroy me (e.g. mind blown, jaw's gone)
pure5152- Member
Re: Valance- Sheldon
I enjoyed parts, and I didn't enjoy parts, but it was actually a very interesting track
Had some SCG style flings and stuff, and the one ASDF loop thing or whatever it was blew me away. Great job Shelly
Had some SCG style flings and stuff, and the one ASDF loop thing or whatever it was blew me away. Great job Shelly
Votale- Member
Re: Valance- Sheldon
If not for 1473, I would expect that you might have had back-to-back featured tracks.
Unless it was too short.
Unless it was too short.
Re: Valance- Sheldon
I think you're one of the most (if not the most) scrutinized riders, Sheldon. In fact, I don't care for your other tracks, but this...this I love.
Commandercoke- Line Rider Legend
Re: Valance- Sheldon
I personally liked this alot better then any of your other tracks. Although you weren't a bit crazy at some parts, It made sense.
Well done
Make more like this plz
Well done
Make more like this plz
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