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Valance- Sheldon

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Post by Sheldon Tue Jul 12, 2011 9:43 pm

Please take the time to give me feedback I really appreciate that. ^^

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My all gwell track I have been working on for quite some time. It is dedicated to aspi33. He inspired me to make this. Also SPL4SHZ0NE, my best friend in LR. Thanks for encouragement. I made a non-contact foot fling loop. First and only other one was made in 2008 by kcbm. Thanks for watching. Also I believe the groll after the long foot fling is the fastest ever made. The really long foot fling is a foot/ other foot asdf. Thanks to SonofTheLuster for editing.

For the record the title was supposed to be Valence, but there was an error somewhere. Now the name means a type of drapery. :|


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Post by GhostY Tue Jul 12, 2011 9:50 pm

wow that was amazing, it reminded me so much of aspi :O

i loved that fling @ 0:39, in fact i loved the whole thing <3
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Post by Z_N-Freak Tue Jul 12, 2011 10:30 pm

Holy smudge. That track was insane D:
It lacked flatsledding though Suspicious
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Post by Inukaza Tue Jul 12, 2011 10:35 pm

Around :50 I said to myself in amazement, "WHAT" and went to rewatch it before I even finished. That's how amazed I was. Amazing.

For the record the title was supposed to be Valence, but there was an error somewhere. Now the name means a type of drapery. :|


lol

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Post by Jam Tue Jul 12, 2011 10:47 pm

And I feel like I'm gonna be the only one saying I didn't like it.

Although I have to say it was technically one of the best tracks I've seen in quite a while, it was utterly boring to watch as it had almost no airtime whatsoever, making it unbelievably predictable.

Sorry, Sheldon... Not my cup of tea. Good job on the technical side of it, though. =)

EDIT in italic.
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Post by Sonoftheluster Tue Jul 12, 2011 11:05 pm

great job 8D
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Post by SPL4SHZ0N3 Wed Jul 13, 2011 12:05 am

Absolutely amazing amount of technical ability. A great watch, especially in slow-mo. Smile
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Post by linerage Wed Jul 13, 2011 12:36 am

Kcbm foot fling made my day. Niiice :3
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Post by Stallie Wed Jul 13, 2011 12:45 am

That was amazing, dude you are a G well geinuis, the strenght of your flings is very good and it had nice flow too. Valance- Sheldon 232659
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Post by Painlobster Wed Jul 13, 2011 1:05 am

I poopied myself.
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Post by Rafael Wed Jul 13, 2011 5:45 am

Your gravitational skills are awesome, Sheldon. I was really surprised to see a 2nd position feet loop. But, I didn't like it...
It was just fling, fling, short (not more than 1080º, and most were under 360º) groll, fling, fling, fling, loop, fling, etc. The speed was also really constant which I totally wouldn't recommend if you're making a track where you don't do any manuals/quirky curves/flatsledding/flanuals or any of that. This might sound really ironic coming from me, but speed isn't always a good thing. There was also only one instant of airtime which, IMO, was unnecessarily long and killed the flow. And another thing that bothered me was that you made a track that was 1:20 long and it didn't contain a single non-directional (the direction doesn't change by it) alt fling. Take a look at the non-technical side of Levitation.
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Post by SethComposerGuy Wed Jul 13, 2011 6:31 am

this is probably my favorite type of track to watch (and make) and enjoyed every second of it. Very Happy
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Post by Helios Pavonine Wed Jul 13, 2011 7:18 am

Oh my. That was very enjoyable. I expected more airtime in certain parts, but all flings were so clean and well-executed I didn't think about it anymore.

Hat's off to that foot fling loop Wink
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Post by KillinTime2792 Wed Jul 13, 2011 7:42 am

Jam wrote:Although I have to say it was technically one of the best tracks I've seen in quite a while, it was utterly boring to watch as it had almost no airtime whatsoever, making it unbelievably predictable.
pardon? are you in your right state of mind sir?
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Post by Jam Wed Jul 13, 2011 12:45 pm

KillinTime2792 wrote:
Jam wrote:Although I have to say it was technically one of the best tracks I've seen in quite a while, it was utterly boring to watch as it had almost no airtime whatsoever, making it unbelievably predictable.
pardon? are you in your right state of mind sir?
Yeah, I am. Boring track to watch in a video. Impressive in fully zoomed in slow motion, but it doesn't make it fun to watch.
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Post by Cereal Wed Jul 13, 2011 1:09 pm

Wow, you have amazing control with gravity. :P

I noticed a kcbm/no contact point foot fling in thar! You're the 2nd person to ever do one of those. 0:50 was just dead sexy.

The only problem was that the recording was kind of choppy... D:

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Post by jlflame2000 Wed Jul 13, 2011 3:21 pm

A couple things,in my opinion it was kinda boring.Still a great track with great gravity control and some sexy tricks xD The reason it's boring is it would slow down for 3 seconds speed up for 5 and keep doing the same thing for part of the track.Overall pretty amazing track.Still faved! Smile
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Post by Wolf_Spirit Wed Jul 13, 2011 4:05 pm

Great variety of flings and I loved the control over bosh ^^
In my opinion it WAS enjoyable to watch maily because I liked the control of bosh through the flings Very Happy
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Post by Sheldon Wed Jul 13, 2011 4:28 pm

Thanks for the mixed reviews guys. Interesting Suspicious
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Post by pure5152 Wed Jul 13, 2011 5:28 pm

screw the "fling after fling after fling" talk (is my opinion). I enjoyed every single second of it. The way you manipulate bosh to tumble and rotate, fling this way and that, and speed and slow down is breathtaking.

Happy 3 year anni Smile You never cease to destroy me (e.g. mind blown, jaw's gone)
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Post by Votale Wed Jul 13, 2011 5:58 pm

I enjoyed parts, and I didn't enjoy parts, but it was actually a very interesting track :P

Had some SCG style flings and stuff, and the one ASDF loop thing or whatever it was blew me away. Great job Shelly
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Post by Sheldon Wed Jul 13, 2011 7:00 pm

Thanks votale and pure I expected a reaction similar to rafael from you votale. xD
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Post by efrazable Wed Jul 13, 2011 7:05 pm

If not for 1473, I would expect that you might have had back-to-back featured tracks.

Unless it was too short.
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Post by Commandercoke Wed Jul 13, 2011 10:11 pm

I think you're one of the most (if not the most) scrutinized riders, Sheldon. In fact, I don't care for your other tracks, but this...this I love.
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Post by CamQuartr Wed Jul 13, 2011 11:01 pm

I personally liked this alot better then any of your other tracks. Although you weren't a bit crazy at some parts, It made sense.

Well done Very Happy
Make more like this plz

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