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*Radium* ~ Sheldon

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Post by Sheldon Mon Jan 10, 2011 10:02 pm

Well here it is. After six long days of work. Thanks to everyone who gave me advice. After the big groll I said screw standards and had fun with it 8D if you cant tell.
no embed watch in hd https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sBhmyrAOHso
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Post by Lankher Mon Jan 10, 2011 10:19 pm

i knew it was slow and pretty crappy :|
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Post by Sheldon Mon Jan 10, 2011 10:21 pm

I expected that from you lankher :|
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Post by linerage Mon Jan 10, 2011 10:21 pm

Oh woah, that surprised the [I am a potty mouth] out of me because you quit for a long time :P The skill level you have in there isn't bad, especially those nifty recycles. The style was distinct to summoning's XD
You made some REALLY WIERD stuff in there, which i have never seen in my life. I don't know if it's hard to make or easy to make, but all i know is that it was fun ^_^ Now there is alot of things you might want to improve on, but since this was a fun track, i won't list them.


I finally understands when Rabid squirrel saids he smiles and laughs when watching a track, when it's so surprisingly good.

lol @ lankher

EDIT: IF you dont know what i mean, the groll at 1:07 is one of those wtf thats wierd moments XD


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Post by Lankher Mon Jan 10, 2011 10:22 pm

Sheldon wrote:I expected that from you lankher :|

it's the truth, if you can't take it, don't upload the video, smartass
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Post by Votale Mon Jan 10, 2011 10:22 pm

That was actually great 8D

I love stuff like this so cool. Digging the integration and recycling. Very sweet :3

Even better knowing it's your 1st since you came back :O
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Post by Sheldon Mon Jan 10, 2011 10:27 pm

Thanks at votale and line rage it was fun and i think i did a few new things
[I am [I am a potty mouth] potty mouth] you lankher
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Post by Cereal Mon Jan 10, 2011 10:32 pm

Very enjoyable overall, I especially liked the XY part and the g-rolls in there.

Try to pressure your manuals a little bit more, as well as make the curves smoother. Other than that, I thought it was especially good for how long it's been since you've made a track.
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Post by ~rawr Tue Jan 11, 2011 12:49 am

Votale wrote:That was actually great 8D

I love stuff like this so cool. Digging the integration and recycling. Very sweet :3

Even better knowing it's your 1st since you came back :O
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Post by Sheldon Tue Jan 11, 2011 12:19 pm

Thanks rawr :O
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Post by ACwazHere Tue Jan 11, 2011 3:51 pm

I liked it. Very Happy You show a lot of potential. Your tricks were executed really well IMO; I just think you need to work on picking what trick flows the best in a given situation. I thought at times it just seems that you decided "hey I'm gonna do this trick, then that one, then one of these."



Looking forward to a new one. Smile
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Post by Inukaza Tue Jan 11, 2011 4:00 pm

That was great, I love it.

So glad to see you back v.v

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Post by Wolf_Spirit Tue Jan 11, 2011 4:08 pm

That was really enjoyable to watch 8D
I especially liked the bit at 1:06!
You had some fantastic recycling in there, you displayed a lot of tricks and executed them well. It is really great to see you back +rep and I hope you make more!
Oh and if you do make more (which I hope you do) try to concentrate on still displaying all of those tricks but maintain the same speed throughout, so good luck and well done!
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Post by TigerXLine Tue Jan 11, 2011 4:20 pm

Great track, Sheldon!!

It was very enjoyable, had a lot of trick varation and the music was great. The later parts where most awesome! ^^

Things I would like to see more of:

- More speedy parts ^^
- Higher speed ratio trough the whole track ^^
- More manual-pressure

Of course, if this is not your style, then don't mind this^

You: "Shut up, Tiger, I make my tracks in my way!"
Me: "True ;_;"

One last thing: the editing...
It was much better than others style of editing, but the text was a little bit hard-to-read (compared to that awesome background which I believe is made by you ^^)

Away from that: GREAT JOB!

Subscribed you*
Rated on Youtube*
Added you as friend on Youtube*
+ repping here*

Make more, plz Wink
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Post by Stallie Tue Jan 11, 2011 5:54 pm

It was pretty good in all. You should improve those flings and m,anuals a little but other than that it was pretty good.

some work to be done:

voltage: 0%[ won't be done in other five months due to deletage.]
Ice 3 track: 40% scened: 0%
Rapto and me on Crystale cave track: 80% scened: 0%
plox: 20%
Frost track: 100% scened: 50%

Brown: Not Started
Red: Just Started
Orange: Half Way Done
Green: Done


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Post by Rafael Tue Jan 11, 2011 6:08 pm

Err, stallie.. This is Sheldon's track thread. Not yours.
Anyway, I really liked this track. Really creative use of integration! Wait for the review coming.. sometime 8D
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Post by Sssschiller Tue Jan 11, 2011 6:32 pm

i enjoyed the track. i didn't heard from you before, but this convinced me Wink i think to collab with u has to be funny.
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Post by Sheldon Tue Jan 11, 2011 8:31 pm

Yay a review 8D and thanks i ride
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Post by Yobanjojoe Wed Jan 12, 2011 1:52 am

stallie wrote:It was pretty good in all. You should improve those flings and m,anuals a little but other than that it was pretty good.

My work to be done:

voltage: 0%[ won't be done in other five months due to deletage.]
Ice 3 track: 40% scened: 0%
Rapto and me on Crystale cave track: 80% scened: 0%
plox: 20%
Frost track: 100% scened: 50%

Brown: Not Started
Red: Just Started
Orange: Half Way Done
Green: Done
your meant to put that in your sig......
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Post by KillinTime2792 Wed Jan 12, 2011 4:19 am

wh is lankhers rep still not as low as podpacks?
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Post by TigerXLine Wed Jan 12, 2011 4:55 am

Lankher doesn't troll all the time (or write what hes thinking if you could call it that). He gets + rates aswell for on reason....

Podback asked for -rep if I remember it correctly...
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Post by Derpinator Wed Jan 12, 2011 8:31 am

stallie wrote:It was pretty good in all. You should improve those flings and m,anuals a little but other than that it was pretty good.

My work to be done:

voltage: 0%[ won't be done in other five months due to deletage.]
Ice 3 track: 40% scened: 0%
Rapto and me on Crystale cave track: 80% scened: 0%
plox: 20%
Frost track: 100% scened: 50%

Brown: Not Started
Red: Just Started
Orange: Half Way Done
Green: Done
I believe you wanted a signature like tigerline.
To do that, you go to profile, signature, and then write all that stuff in there Smile

To track: I liked it, i enjoyed it, i watched it.
The fling recycle made me say WAUW like other parts of the track.
Nice to see you back Smile
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Post by Sheldon Wed Jan 12, 2011 1:34 pm

THanks rapto 8D
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Post by Stallie Wed Jan 12, 2011 3:58 pm

Rafael wrote:Err, stallie.. This is Sheldon's track thread. Not yours.

Rafeal i'm just posting some of my tracks that are not done yet like everyone else does. What is wrong with that and i'm shore sheldon wouldn't mind. *Radium* ~ Sheldon 173596 , Right sheldon!
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Post by Rafael Wed Jan 12, 2011 4:05 pm

If you want to tell people how far you're done with your tracks then make a thread of put it in your signature.
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