*Radium* ~ Sheldon
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*Radium* ~ Sheldon
Well here it is. After six long days of work. Thanks to everyone who gave me advice. After the big groll I said screw standards and had fun with it if you cant tell.
no embed watch in hd https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sBhmyrAOHso
no embed watch in hd https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sBhmyrAOHso
Re: *Radium* ~ Sheldon
Oh woah, that surprised the [I am a potty mouth] out of me because you quit for a long time The skill level you have in there isn't bad, especially those nifty recycles. The style was distinct to summoning's XD
You made some REALLY WIERD stuff in there, which i have never seen in my life. I don't know if it's hard to make or easy to make, but all i know is that it was fun ^_^ Now there is alot of things you might want to improve on, but since this was a fun track, i won't list them.
I finally understands when Rabid squirrel saids he smiles and laughs when watching a track, when it's so surprisingly good.
lol @ lankher
EDIT: IF you dont know what i mean, the groll at 1:07 is one of those wtf thats wierd moments XD
You made some REALLY WIERD stuff in there, which i have never seen in my life. I don't know if it's hard to make or easy to make, but all i know is that it was fun ^_^ Now there is alot of things you might want to improve on, but since this was a fun track, i won't list them.
I finally understands when Rabid squirrel saids he smiles and laughs when watching a track, when it's so surprisingly good.
lol @ lankher
EDIT: IF you dont know what i mean, the groll at 1:07 is one of those wtf thats wierd moments XD
Last edited by linerage on Mon Jan 10, 2011 10:25 pm; edited 1 time in total
linerage- Member
Re: *Radium* ~ Sheldon
Sheldon wrote:I expected that from you lankher
it's the truth, if you can't take it, don't upload the video, smartass
Lankher- Member
Re: *Radium* ~ Sheldon
That was actually great
I love stuff like this so cool. Digging the integration and recycling. Very sweet :3
Even better knowing it's your 1st since you came back
I love stuff like this so cool. Digging the integration and recycling. Very sweet :3
Even better knowing it's your 1st since you came back
Votale- Member
Re: *Radium* ~ Sheldon
Thanks at votale and line rage it was fun and i think i did a few new things
[I am [I am a potty mouth] potty mouth] you lankher
[I am [I am a potty mouth] potty mouth] you lankher
Re: *Radium* ~ Sheldon
Very enjoyable overall, I especially liked the XY part and the g-rolls in there.
Try to pressure your manuals a little bit more, as well as make the curves smoother. Other than that, I thought it was especially good for how long it's been since you've made a track.
Try to pressure your manuals a little bit more, as well as make the curves smoother. Other than that, I thought it was especially good for how long it's been since you've made a track.
Cereal- Line Rider Legend
Re: *Radium* ~ Sheldon
qftVotale wrote:That was actually great
I love stuff like this so cool. Digging the integration and recycling. Very sweet :3
Even better knowing it's your 1st since you came back
~rawr- Member
Re: *Radium* ~ Sheldon
I liked it. You show a lot of potential. Your tricks were executed really well IMO; I just think you need to work on picking what trick flows the best in a given situation. I thought at times it just seems that you decided "hey I'm gonna do this trick, then that one, then one of these."
Looking forward to a new one.
+rep
Looking forward to a new one.
+rep
ACwazHere- Member
- fuck around and get dunked on
Re: *Radium* ~ Sheldon
That was really enjoyable to watch
I especially liked the bit at 1:06!
You had some fantastic recycling in there, you displayed a lot of tricks and executed them well. It is really great to see you back +rep and I hope you make more!
Oh and if you do make more (which I hope you do) try to concentrate on still displaying all of those tricks but maintain the same speed throughout, so good luck and well done!
I especially liked the bit at 1:06!
You had some fantastic recycling in there, you displayed a lot of tricks and executed them well. It is really great to see you back +rep and I hope you make more!
Oh and if you do make more (which I hope you do) try to concentrate on still displaying all of those tricks but maintain the same speed throughout, so good luck and well done!
Wolf_Spirit- Member
- Retired Admin
Re: *Radium* ~ Sheldon
Great track, Sheldon!!
It was very enjoyable, had a lot of trick varation and the music was great. The later parts where most awesome! ^^
Things I would like to see more of:
- More speedy parts ^^
- Higher speed ratio trough the whole track ^^
- More manual-pressure
Of course, if this is not your style, then don't mind this^
You: "Shut up, Tiger, I make my tracks in my way!"
Me: "True ;_;"
One last thing: the editing...
It was much better than others style of editing, but the text was a little bit hard-to-read (compared to that awesome background which I believe is made by you ^^)
Away from that: GREAT JOB!
Subscribed you*
Rated on Youtube*
Added you as friend on Youtube*
+ repping here*
Make more, plz
It was very enjoyable, had a lot of trick varation and the music was great. The later parts where most awesome! ^^
Things I would like to see more of:
- More speedy parts ^^
- Higher speed ratio trough the whole track ^^
- More manual-pressure
Of course, if this is not your style, then don't mind this^
You: "Shut up, Tiger, I make my tracks in my way!"
Me: "True ;_;"
One last thing: the editing...
It was much better than others style of editing, but the text was a little bit hard-to-read (compared to that awesome background which I believe is made by you ^^)
Away from that: GREAT JOB!
Subscribed you*
Rated on Youtube*
Added you as friend on Youtube*
+ repping here*
Make more, plz
TigerXLine- Member
- I used to play Line Rider and be weird.
Re: *Radium* ~ Sheldon
It was pretty good in all. You should improve those flings and m,anuals a little but other than that it was pretty good.
some work to be done:
voltage: 0%[ won't be done in other five months due to deletage.]
Ice 3 track: 40% scened: 0%
Rapto and me on Crystale cave track: 80% scened: 0%
plox: 20%
Frost track: 100% scened: 50%
Brown: Not Started
Red: Just Started
Orange: Half Way Done
Green: Done
some work to be done:
voltage: 0%[ won't be done in other five months due to deletage.]
Ice 3 track: 40% scened: 0%
Rapto and me on Crystale cave track: 80% scened: 0%
plox: 20%
Frost track: 100% scened: 50%
Brown: Not Started
Red: Just Started
Orange: Half Way Done
Green: Done
Last edited by stallie on Wed Jan 12, 2011 4:00 pm; edited 1 time in total
Stallie- Member
Re: *Radium* ~ Sheldon
Err, stallie.. This is Sheldon's track thread. Not yours.
Anyway, I really liked this track. Really creative use of integration! Wait for the review coming.. sometime
Anyway, I really liked this track. Really creative use of integration! Wait for the review coming.. sometime
Rafael- Line Rider Legend
Re: *Radium* ~ Sheldon
i enjoyed the track. i didn't heard from you before, but this convinced me i think to collab with u has to be funny.
Sssschiller- Member
Re: *Radium* ~ Sheldon
your meant to put that in your sig......stallie wrote:It was pretty good in all. You should improve those flings and m,anuals a little but other than that it was pretty good.
My work to be done:
voltage: 0%[ won't be done in other five months due to deletage.]
Ice 3 track: 40% scened: 0%
Rapto and me on Crystale cave track: 80% scened: 0%
plox: 20%
Frost track: 100% scened: 50%
Brown: Not Started
Red: Just Started
Orange: Half Way Done
Green: Done
Yobanjojoe- Member
- swag
Re: *Radium* ~ Sheldon
Lankher doesn't troll all the time (or write what hes thinking if you could call it that). He gets + rates aswell for on reason....
Podback asked for -rep if I remember it correctly...
Podback asked for -rep if I remember it correctly...
TigerXLine- Member
- I used to play Line Rider and be weird.
Re: *Radium* ~ Sheldon
I believe you wanted a signature like tigerline.stallie wrote:It was pretty good in all. You should improve those flings and m,anuals a little but other than that it was pretty good.
My work to be done:
voltage: 0%[ won't be done in other five months due to deletage.]
Ice 3 track: 40% scened: 0%
Rapto and me on Crystale cave track: 80% scened: 0%
plox: 20%
Frost track: 100% scened: 50%
Brown: Not Started
Red: Just Started
Orange: Half Way Done
Green: Done
To do that, you go to profile, signature, and then write all that stuff in there
To track: I liked it, i enjoyed it, i watched it.
The fling recycle made me say WAUW like other parts of the track.
Nice to see you back
Derpinator- Member
Re: *Radium* ~ Sheldon
Rafael wrote:Err, stallie.. This is Sheldon's track thread. Not yours.
Rafeal i'm just posting some of my tracks that are not done yet like everyone else does. What is wrong with that and i'm shore sheldon wouldn't mind. , Right sheldon!
Stallie- Member
Re: *Radium* ~ Sheldon
If you want to tell people how far you're done with your tracks then make a thread of put it in your signature.
Rafael- Line Rider Legend
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