Another Track - Cliff Diving!!! xD

https://youtu.be/eHYA_JsA7mM

The scenery was not bad but better and your track was short but simple, though it was pretty good for a beginner, keep it up.

your scenery has gotten better and the track was quite interesting, pretty good.

tysm i take these comments to heart and i improve and im happy there are people that are so nice!

for you I'd recommend that you spend ore time on making everything the best you think it can possibly be, and making everything longer. Also, watch some tutorials, and there are some great text tutorials on here (mine ), but don't copy people's styles. All in all, great work, and keep it up! it's great to have new members here.

this is good for a start !

Use the line rider standalone.

loved it...oldschool idea

A great start for scenery, you cleary have tried different shading styles, experimenting with scenery is great to see what you like to do and scene ^^
You can make your scenery tracks longer if you like, but short tracks are good for making everything perfect in a short space.
To improve you can watch other tracks to pick up with that looks good in tracks and to discover your own style.
Finally, try to use a standalone, the background on the website is irritating in videos (not sure why LR.com would do that though)
Here's a link to help
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Great start, and good luck with furture scenery!

i cant get standalone it wont work but its ok i still like linerider .com

i need to download the adobe thingy but i cant find it

if you're talking about standalone flash, you can get it right here:

http://www.adobe.com/support/flashplayer/downloads.html