First Track!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=00ayK50V_e0

Tell me what you think, the stall in the "middle-ish" wasn't intended to be so long
First track, comments and constructive criticism are warmly greeted!

Dang... first track, really? I didn't have g-wells in my first track. I was impressed by some of the recycling, actually. And there was some parts with nice, consistent flow. And it was relatively omnidirectional.

Some things I'd work to improve on:
Smoother curves - take some more time to develop those curves. You've got the basic principle to keep Bosh alive with those curves, but it just looks ugly. Use smaller lines to achieve the same thing. It looks better.
Highspeed - I noticed that there were a few spots where you had some nice speed going, but you killed it fairly quickly. Try keeping the speed up a little longer. I think you can handle it. ^^
Chains/Flings - try and connect several wells together. I see you did it once, kind of. I want to see it more, and improved upon, as well. Try looking up some chain and fling tutorials, if you're having trouble. And if you're up for the challenge of making your wells stronger, you can look at my tutorial. I think I'm the only one who's make a "how to make your well stronger" tutorial, but if there's another one, I'd suggest you look at theirs.

Overall, fantastic job for your first track. I like all of it, except for the couple flow killers. Like that stall thing in the middle.

Really good for a first track! It had some interesting moments in it, like that barrel roll

If you really want to improve in lr, I recommend you start off by learning good manuals before good quirk. Manuals are MUCH easier to learn.

I love seeing new members post tracks, so I hope to see more from you

I honestly think that quirk is easier than manuals, so I kinda forgot that most people aren't like that. Yeah. Manuals before quirk. Unless you're weird like me!

Thanks! I can never hold my manuals for very long, working on another small track right now, trying to incorporate my first fling.

Dayum. DAYUM. Really nice first track, interesting moments

Cereal, which "barrel roll" were you referring to?
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I'm glad you all see some "interesting" moments in it

That's a [censored] of talent there.