Re: *Radium* ~ Sheldon

by **Sheldon** Wed Jan 12, 2011 5:08 pm

Hey raf how bout that reveiw

by rabid squirrel Wed Jan 12, 2011 6:38 pm

epic comeback track! Loved the length in particular, we never see omnitracks of that length anymore.

by **Sheldon** Wed Jan 12, 2011 6:48 pm

could have made it longer considering i made that in 6 days total i didnt even work but for 3 of them

by **Rafael** Thu Jan 13, 2011 4:19 pm

Rank: Decent track:
Curves: 4/5
Style: 9/10
Flow: 8/10
Execution of tricks: 8/10
Variation: 10/10
Speed: 8/10
Flings: 11/15
Manuals: 12/15
Entertainment: 13/15
Total: 83/100
Criticism
Really good job Sheldon! It was very stylish and fun, especially for a comeback track! I love how fast you improve just by watching tracks. It was a lot of fun to watch and the integration was really well done. All I can say is that I can't wait for your next track! Very Happy

by **Sheldon** Thu Jan 13, 2011 8:42 pm

Just a question how did i lose points on flings were they to weak? Suspicious

by Gliss Fri Jan 14, 2011 12:14 am

Pretty damn good... or a lot better than me =/
Flow a little weird here and there but solid track.

by **Rafael** Fri Jan 14, 2011 2:37 am

Sheldon wrote:Just a question how did i lose points on flings were they to weak?

Yeah I thought they were a bit too weak. Could've been me though

by **Commandercoke** Fri Jan 14, 2011 1:37 pm

Cool. Glad to see you back to track making. However, it felt very weak. I know you can improve that quickly though.

by **Sheldon** Fri Jan 14, 2011 3:52 pm

Yeah I kinda winged it I could do better but It would take much longer

by Helios Pavonine Fri Jan 14, 2011 5:01 pm

TigerLine7 wrote:Lankher doesn't troll all the time (or write what hes thinking if you could call it that). He gets + rates aswell for on reason....

Podback asked for -rep if I remember it correctly...

1. Stop calling me Podback. I am Podpack.
2. In the beginning, I did the opposite. I asked why people did it and that they had to stop, but when I knew the real reason (which ACTUALLY was the reason why people -repped after a few months though), I actually saw the fun of it.

For the track, I loved it. Great integrations, great flings and the trick variety and execution was amzing. Keep it going!

One little off-topic thing: Watch 1:33. That's the trick at my part in New in Town by Novicity, but it's so easily executable that it actually not worth it to mention. The weird thing is that Bosh' tail goes through the line (I didn't use any green lines) which he normally doesn't because there's something called pressure.

by TigerXLine Fri Jan 14, 2011 5:03 pm

Podpack wrote:
TigerLine7 wrote:Lankher doesn't troll all the time (or write what hes thinking if you could call it that). He gets + rates aswell for on reason....

Podback asked for -rep if I remember it correctly...

1. Stop calling me Podback. I am Podpack.

Oh, no, not again

Sorry Podpack

by **Sheldon** Sun Jan 16, 2011 11:14 pm

/offtopic

so its not Codsack

by linerage Mon Jan 17, 2011 12:09 am

I always thought it was ballistic bagel.

I'm nowhere close..

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