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Post by Apple Wed Aug 11, 2010 7:30 am

The quirk at the begining is 3 months old, but i liked it enough to finnish it.
I Fail at 1:15
Satelites-Dave Matthews Band

(there are only two reasons i picked this song, 1: i learned it on guitar, and 2: for the airtime at 44)

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Post by Inukaza Wed Aug 11, 2010 7:59 am

The music didn't fit for a good part of the track. (Quirk section)
Titles were way to long.
Track was alright tho.

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Post by TigerXLine Wed Aug 11, 2010 9:57 am

Very relaxing! Specially the music. As you said: The music at 0:44 does fit pretty well xD

But the song didn't fit to the quirk, as Inu said. Quirks need a little faster music and rytmh. Very Happy

I like the quick-changing manuals and that stuff (maybe because i'm a manualer) and I liked that you started with quirk and so went on to a manual-style. Had it been bigger, you could compare it to the Millenium-track by Dapoe. (not the scenery and music).

Rating: 4 of 6 Thumbs Up
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Post by Purtle Wed Aug 11, 2010 3:51 pm

I think you meant 4:49 instead of what you said. "2: for the airtime at 44)"

I liked it though. Intro was sort of long though, and then the track was short ;-;.
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Post by Apple Wed Aug 11, 2010 4:03 pm

yeah, :49. oops.

Ill take a 4/6 tigerline7!
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Post by Catz Wed Aug 11, 2010 4:06 pm

Sony Music Entertainment :| Eep :facepalm: Stern but Fair Angry
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Post by Apple Wed Aug 11, 2010 4:07 pm

sorry, works where i live.
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Post by Catz Wed Aug 11, 2010 4:25 pm

Because germany is gay with youtube :|
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Post by Cereal Wed Aug 11, 2010 4:34 pm

I honestly don't care about music syncing, that's something else I've noticed in tracks nowadays that old tracks used to not have. Back when I joined, no one cared if the music didn't fit, lol.

But I thought the track was pretty good. Your manuals are great, but you need to improve on the pressure of the manuals. Quirky section was good too I guess.
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Post by Apple Wed Aug 11, 2010 6:35 pm

i just made one of the most pressured manual of my life, just before reading this. hehe.
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