Hummingbird - shua

This track was mostly based around an editing idea I have never seen done before. Hope you guys realize what I did. Really fun to make.

I think you're the first person to use splits for a naked track haha

That was awesome

Very creative! I was excited throughout the entire track from 0:20 till the end.

boo split a naked track one time because his fps got so bad @jojo
cool concept bro I really enjoyed that

great concept and good execution. Though I sort of have the same feeling about it after watching telephoto. Like "cool... I guess...?"

I wonder if there's a way to take this idea to another level, but I can't think of anything at present.

That aside, the track was really fun and creative and I enjoyed it a lot and I am really digging your style lately

@rabid squirrel wrote:"cool... I guess...?"

That's exactly how I felt about it. In 7/9 parts, it's not really noticeable and after editing it all together, I was slightly underwhelmed. I think the idea has potential, but I think the track needs to be more thought out from the start.

@rabid squirrel wrote:I wonder if there's a way to take this idea to another level, but I can't think of anything at present.

scenery wise? if the track you are trying to scene is too packed in one area but that area moves out of the frame every so often, removing unrequired lines in the frames that bosh interact with, then after that stage re loading the track place flag, remove offending lines, draw scenery.

obvs scene the track areas that can be scened first, then separate save files for each time bosh passes through the area?

Shammies and I did a similar thing for the blue replay of our old collab Alphas.

But still, really cool when you think about it.

Editing was nice. I didn't care for the track much at all. I didn't see any flow, rotation, or power. It looked kinda like you tried being creative in a genre of track you don't know much about and it come out clunky to me. Maybe I missed something, but I didn't find much to enjoy in this one.

I think what this comes down to, much like telephoto, is that there was an interesting idea there, but it wasn't executed with a track that fit the form of what it was looking to do.

I hope I'm making some level of sense.

^ Like Inhibitions, or likfe CAF? I have this problem.

Dapianokid wrote:^ Like Inhibitions, or likfe CAF? I have this problem.

I would say lots of people have this problem

that ending, left, right, jump, left right, bump, left, right twoink, twoink, WOOHOO