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Post by Derpinator Sat Jun 05, 2010 6:12 am

My "old" best track with 9000 lines (8715)
A lot of you guys said my recording was bad. It was, (Turbo Boost - BETTER VERSION 623181) but TigerLine7 showed me how to do.
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Post by Helios Pavonine Sat Jun 05, 2010 6:18 am

Nice! I love the scenery! Work on the balance of the manuals and granuals. Recording is fine.

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Post by Purtle Sun Jun 06, 2010 12:18 am

The part at :22-:23 stuck out. The track line going through the scenery, the top of that land piece or whatever.

The rest of the scenery was okay. Some parts were better than others. Some needed polishing
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Post by darklight Sun Jun 06, 2010 11:34 am

the scenery was pretty good, I liked the black parts and some of the abstract stuff. Try to work on the neatness and planning of your scenery though. You should mantain a somewhat constant style throughout at least a quarter of the track. this track just jumped around through different styles.
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Post by rabid squirrel Sun Jun 06, 2010 1:26 pm

^ this.

Also, I would try to make the track more interesting. Doesn't necessarily mean more tricks, but this track was slow and sometimes boring.

The scenery did show potential though Wink I'm sure you'll get good if you keep working at it.
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Post by The Cold Rider Tue Jun 08, 2010 3:58 pm

Dkx2= DonkeyKong times Two Smile

Nice scenery, it's but I want smoother manuals and moar balanced.
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Post by Lukking Wed Jun 09, 2010 9:15 am

good (basic)scenry
and btw there is no old or new masterpiece.
you make your masterpiece when this is probably your last and best track.
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Post by Cereal Thu Jun 10, 2010 4:45 pm

EPIC scenery, had a lot of detail, and was effective.

Decent track I guess, the flow could have been better, but meh.

nice job.
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