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Post by Jam Sat Oct 10, 2009 5:28 pm

*coughs* I'm back guys!

Track goes down here.


Hope you like it.

By the way, another track coming soon: Broken Iris. Keep an eye open for that.


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Post by wolf with earrings Sat Oct 10, 2009 5:33 pm

as i told you on msn, could use a little speed in some areas.oh
other than that, awesome!4.5/5

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Post by Jam Sat Oct 10, 2009 5:39 pm

Thanks wolf. (I'm not gonna use the word I wanna use.)
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Post by Votale Sat Oct 10, 2009 5:43 pm

What was the beginning font? Rolling Iris - Jam Icon_eek
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Post by Jam Sat Oct 10, 2009 5:47 pm

Imapct, all caps with changed horisontal tracking. (I don't have the exact numbers, sorry.)
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Post by Votale Sat Oct 10, 2009 6:10 pm

Jam wrote:Imapct, all caps with changed horisontal tracking. (I don't have the exact numbers, sorry.)

but what's the big white bar under the letters from then?
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Post by CamQuartr Sat Oct 10, 2009 6:11 pm

Your getting better Smile

glad to see your coming back.

oh and nice titles

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Post by Jam Sat Oct 10, 2009 6:12 pm

Votale wrote:
Jam wrote:Imapct, all caps with changed horisontal tracking. (I don't have the exact numbers, sorry.)

but what's the big white bar under the letters from then?
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CamQuartr wrote:Your getting better Rolling Iris - Jam Icon_smile

glad to see your coming back.

oh and nice titles

Thanks Cam!
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Post by Nubcake Sat Oct 10, 2009 6:14 pm

welcome back, my only complaint is it is very slow
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Post by Jam Sat Oct 10, 2009 7:19 pm

Yeah, the track is slow, PLUS the recording slowed it down a bit.
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Post by AkidisPwnage Sat Oct 10, 2009 7:25 pm

Try not to put red lines going the opposite way, it makes the track look a lot smoother.
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Post by Jam Sat Oct 10, 2009 9:31 pm

Thanks for the tip!

And I don't make bled tracks all that often.

I like all-blue much better.
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Post by IoneRendar Sun Oct 11, 2009 4:53 am

Quite good.
Manuals could be much more smoother, for example @ 0:39.
Boring part @ 1:23.
You have pretty good skillz, keep it up!

sry for being so harsh! =)
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Post by Rafael Sun Oct 11, 2009 7:51 am

I really liked the barrel rolls, I enjoyed the whole track except for 1:23 - end :P

Keep this up Thumbs Up
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Post by Jam Sun Oct 11, 2009 10:43 am

Yes, I get it, 1:23 is boring.
Now how about an explanation on why I did that?
You can probably notice how perfect the Song-Credits Fade timing is, right? To do that I had to make the track longer, but I was stuck, I couldn't get out of thay part without making it too long.

Anyways, thanks for the comments, and HEY RAFAEL!
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Post by zipridaX Sun Oct 11, 2009 7:40 pm

That's the shiz
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Post by Se7eN Sun Oct 11, 2009 9:19 pm

I really Enjoyed it
I see much potential in you!
BTW, Dont do anything to the track, just for editing purposes.

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