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Post by Jam Mon Oct 12, 2009 11:59 am

Yes! It's finished!

This is a short, all-blue track.

I think it's my best track yet. Most will agree.




Blue-Proof, 2639 px X 3582 px, PNG. <<<- THAT IS A LINK!
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Post by Rafael Mon Oct 12, 2009 12:01 pm

I'm not able to see it because I'm thinking about how the terrible music style in this song has ever been made.
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Post by Jam Mon Oct 12, 2009 12:05 pm

Suck my... Pencil Rafael, click the MUTE button.
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Post by Wolf_Spirit Mon Oct 12, 2009 12:30 pm

The tracks was pretty awesome, nothing special, but it was good. Shame
about the flatsledding, but that's only a little bit of the track Broken Iris - Jam 173596 I
haven't seen a track from you in AGES, maybe 'coz I ignore most things
in the bare tracks section Broken Iris - Jam 92494 The music seemed like it was gonna be
good.....until he started 'singing' however when they didn't scream and
shout it sounded good, that what it's like with most screaming bands,
eventhough that wasn't screamo. wow, I can evaluate the music really
well, but not the actual video Broken Iris - Jam 92494
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Post by Jam Mon Oct 12, 2009 1:41 pm

Hehe, I've released a track... 9 days ago, Rolling Iris. And I'm working on [secret name] Iris right now.

AND... Yeah! The flatsledding...
AND... Yeah! I won't use a metal song in my next videos...
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Post by Wolf_Spirit Mon Oct 12, 2009 2:31 pm

I don't see anything wrong with metal songs, and I do generally ignore things in the bare tracks section :P but I liked the name of this, so I watched it :P
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Post by CamQuartr Mon Oct 12, 2009 5:02 pm

woah awesome.

it was really good.
the flow was up all the way untill that flatsledding at the end.

keep it up Smile

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Post by Jam Tue Oct 13, 2009 7:24 am

Yeah, about that fletsledding... I was a bit tired of working in the same place all the time, if I have to check every few lines to see if I didn't affect Bosh when he goes through the same place before the lines I just made, I'll most likely go insane. So I just thought "You know what, lemme end this shi-!".

And Wolf why would you ignore the Bare section? It's the pwnliest!
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Post by bmanfoley Tue Oct 13, 2009 3:35 pm

after watching this 3 times, I've finally surmised a comment Broken Iris - Jam 92494

I really liked the beginning especially, your speed and flow was really good. and what are these you guise thar talkin about Broken Iris - Jam 581354? the flatsledding is fine. nothing wrong with it all. one thing I must critique is that there was a lot of time spent in the air, it takes away from the action. try to work on that Broken Iris - Jam Icon_wink?

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