Line rider / line riding --- Volcanic scened!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tbguyo29v8k

My most scened track

Over 20,000 lines

4:02 in length

Dedicated to Nubcake.

hehe, kinda a LRG Techdawg copy:)

gd work anyway, even tho the crane was a copy, it looked gd.
the only thing which was a little anoying was that it felt a little repetive :S

I liked that

But there are a few things you should keep an eye on next time:
The track only went rightwards, I know it's harder to scene, but
try to let bosh go to any side!
The scenery got a bit repetitive, try to put some more monuments in there or change the basic landscape a bit.

The crane was very nice.

Keep the work up

initial thoughts:
- lots of trees
- shading at :38 - ???
- not exactly epic crane, but not a bad drawing.
- getting a little repetitive, and looks like Make Believe
- lol Continental. like, exact copy
- onoz, what happened the teh scenery it felt like MMX

Good scening. Try to work on originality, and put moar stuff like the crane in And be more creative about where the track goes too. This was not bad at all though!

And music cues felt like Utopia (fail - as in quiet part of the song during the whole track and then it finally gets interesting during the playback )

a little more work on the manuals.

and think about the scenery. make it realistic (shading, etc.)

good track and all, manuals and some quirk, and everyone already said what i was thinking, but on the scenery, try to be more defined, like making the outer lines thicker or something,by double lining them.

This was pretty good! Though I like the track better than the scenery. No offence. The scenery was still nice!

The trees reminded me of monumental. It did feel a little repetetive. but what happened to the scenery at the end? That track should be considered incomplete . Good track though.

MrEmulation wrote:The trees reminded me of monumental. It did feel a little repetetive. but what happened to the scenery at the end? That track should be considered incomplete . Good track though.

I cant scene quirk

Great Job. Keep working at your own style and you'll be awesome!

Ehhh...

Too remniscent of Monumental, yeah.
Keep the shading lines parallel if you're going to do them that way, if you want to use someone else's style, then you have to do it extremely neatly, with an OCD level of perfectionism.

Fix the recording, and too much air-time on the track, flow needs work, and balance on manuals could also be improved. Quirking should be seamless; it's a bit awkward right now.

Very much like Tech Dawgs but still it is very nice i would say a 7-8/10