Linerider: Ragequit
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Linerider: Ragequit
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xH0aGaoKPrk
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xH0aGaoKPrk
Stallie- Member
Re: Linerider: Ragequit
Strange title.
I see you've improved the strength of the wells, but they're not together as normal flings at many times, and random one lined wells make your track look ugly. Keep working on making more powerful flings.
I see you've improved the strength of the wells, but they're not together as normal flings at many times, and random one lined wells make your track look ugly. Keep working on making more powerful flings.
linerage- Member
Re: Linerider: Ragequit
The track was pretty nice, but for a track with such a vivid name, I found myself saying "bleh" at the end.
This was probably due to the driving consistency that lurked underneath the surface of the track. Think of the flow of a track like an animal. Jackrabbits are quick, so that when they do stop it has a massive impact. Turtles move slowly, but that gives you time to look at the structure of a turtle and marvel at its ingenuity. Turtles and jackrabbits are both very interesting creatures.
This track had flow that resembled a donkey. It plodded along, consistent but weary, getting you as far as you wanted to go but no further.
Donkeys are not terribly interesting.
Not that it was a horrible track; on the contrary, it was respectably dense and varied. But the flow is everything, and you gotta look below the surface, man!
Again, though, I like where you're going. The fact I even typed this up after a couple weeks away means I care. You seem to be learning the little tricks of alt pretty quickly
Cheers.
This was probably due to the driving consistency that lurked underneath the surface of the track. Think of the flow of a track like an animal. Jackrabbits are quick, so that when they do stop it has a massive impact. Turtles move slowly, but that gives you time to look at the structure of a turtle and marvel at its ingenuity. Turtles and jackrabbits are both very interesting creatures.
This track had flow that resembled a donkey. It plodded along, consistent but weary, getting you as far as you wanted to go but no further.
Donkeys are not terribly interesting.
Not that it was a horrible track; on the contrary, it was respectably dense and varied. But the flow is everything, and you gotta look below the surface, man!
Again, though, I like where you're going. The fact I even typed this up after a couple weeks away means I care. You seem to be learning the little tricks of alt pretty quickly
Cheers.
OTDE- Administrator
- the postham mindset
Re: Linerider: Ragequit
quite a strange name, "ragequit" is filled with your talents flowing out of your imagination, so awesome job!
automatizer- Member
Re: Linerider: Ragequit
good job i find the track pretty funny. Also + to music, it's not the typical line rider music and I like that
In some special way I liked the pressure lack in this track
to say it in the way otde said it...I'm a fan of donkeys. The much cooler than horses because they give a sh** about the world
Edit: That are really many shotouts
In some special way I liked the pressure lack in this track
to say it in the way otde said it...I'm a fan of donkeys. The much cooler than horses because they give a sh** about the world
Edit: That are really many shotouts
Sssschiller- Member
Re: Linerider: Ragequit
Sssschiller wrote:good job i find the track pretty funny. Also + to music, it's not the typical line rider music and I like that
In some special way I liked the pressure lack in this track
to say it in the way otde said it...I'm a fan of donkeys. The much cooler than horses because they give a sh** about the world
Edit: That are really many shotouts
Ah, yes, but do you want your track compared to Eeyore?
OTDE- Administrator
- the postham mindset
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