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Post by Stallie Tue Nov 01, 2011 6:17 pm

I hope you will enjoy it. 8D


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OiywZ1J036M
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Post by Rave Tue Nov 01, 2011 6:44 pm

fun.
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Post by Sheldon Tue Nov 01, 2011 6:55 pm

I can see you as a future quirker, stallie. You just need time. I'm sure we have all been at the point you are currently at at one point. The flings are pretty rudimentary and need some cleaning up and strengthening. Tracks aren't always about making fling after fling after fling. But, once you learn all the tricks line rider is pretty much a sandbox. You can make whatever you please as long as its possible. You will get passed learning tricks, and start focusing on what types of tricks go good in succession. You can do it stallie. I believe in you. Good luck. Thumbs Up
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Post by hypothet Tue Nov 01, 2011 7:24 pm

Sheldon wrote:Quirk is good. Be quirk do tricks make good sandbox tricks learn need time must go deeper.

FOCUSSSSSSSS.

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Post by LineMagiX Tue Nov 01, 2011 7:36 pm

HG42 wrote:
Sheldon wrote:Quirk is good. Be quirk do tricks make good sandbox tricks learn need time must go deeper.

FOCUSSSSSSSS.

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Lots of string action. I like this. :P
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Post by Inukaza Tue Nov 01, 2011 7:45 pm

Needs stronger wells. You were wrong to accuse me of not knowing what I'm saying. Not being rude for not reason, but just to prove a point, I must say this. Your wells were VERY weak. kthx.bai

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Post by Cereal Tue Nov 01, 2011 8:02 pm

Your flings are great for the most part, but the alt flings were way too weak, imo.

Try to add more trick variation and such. Wink
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Post by OTDE Tue Nov 01, 2011 8:28 pm

Ya'need some airtime, boi!

Besides that, it was very interesting, keep on truckin'. Very Happy
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Post by efrazable Tue Nov 01, 2011 9:14 pm

Rainbow Dash wrote:Needs stronger wells. You were wrong to accuse me of not knowing what I'm saying. Not being rude for not reason, but just to prove a point, I must say this. Your wells were VERY weak. kthx.bai
Should it have been someone else, that review would have been followed by "overall, I liked it Linerider: Recession 173596". Overall, I liked it! Linerider: Recession 173596
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Post by Sssschiller Wed Nov 02, 2011 3:40 pm

I really enjoyed it! Just make stronger flings Smile
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Post by Helios Pavonine Wed Nov 02, 2011 4:15 pm

Fling after fling with barely any speed variation.

Sorry, but this is not what I expected. Don't make such a hype out of it next time... Or, well, backfire that to me when I release Eden, k?
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Post by SETH Wed Nov 02, 2011 5:31 pm

i like all quirk tracks, great job , try to work the speed and trick variation.
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Post by Rafael Wed Nov 02, 2011 6:10 pm

FINALLY a good reviewable track! I'll edit this post soon Smile
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Post by Z_N-Freak Fri Nov 04, 2011 6:42 pm

I like this track. I have to say that I am kinda drowsy atm and I just really like the mellow flow. Also, awesome song, though it's not a very mellow song, but it's still freaking awesome Smile
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Post by rabid squirrel Fri Nov 04, 2011 10:16 pm

HG42 wrote:
Sheldon wrote:Quirk is good. Be quirk do tricks make good sandbox tricks learn need time must go deeper.

FOCUSSSSSSSS.

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Post by captain_cornflakes Sat Nov 05, 2011 7:19 am

Well i enjoyed it. 8D
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Post by JoaTrades Sat Nov 05, 2011 8:50 pm

Overall all I liked the video.

The flow was good and the trick variety in the track was fairly decent although the track didn't seem all that creative or original. The main flaw with the track in my opinion though is the weakness of some of the wells.

I didn't dislike the music but I didn't feel like it fit the track. It seemed like it would have fit better with a fast that has a lot of pressure/strength, so again the wells could have been stronger. The track felt a little loose and slow for this song.

The editing pretty much just follows the common format for LR videos. I liked the opening and ending titles although the credits were just meh.

I liked the track but the wells could have been stronger and the music didn't fit too well imo.
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Post by Stallie Fri Nov 11, 2011 8:00 pm

Simpeleton wrote:fun.

Thanks.

Sheldon wrote:I can see you as a future quirker, stallie. You just need time. I'm sure we have all been at the point you are currently at at one point. The flings are pretty rudimentary and need some cleaning up and strengthening. Tracks aren't always about making fling after fling after fling. But, once you learn all the tricks line rider is pretty much a sandbox. You can make whatever you please as long as its possible. You will get passed learning tricks, and start focusing on what types of tricks go good in succession. You can do it stallie. I believe in you. Good luck. Thumbs Up

Thanks for the advice and the support.


HG42 wrote:Fix'd, You passed mah expectations, stalleh. Now punch them in the face next time.

That's nice to know.

boo. wrote: Lots of string action. I like this. :P

Thanks.

Rainbow Dash wrote:Needs stronger wells. You were wrong to accuse me of not knowing what I'm saying. Not being rude for not reason, but just to prove a point, I must say this. Your wells were VERY weak. kthx.bai

I shall do that on my next track and thanks for the advice.

Cereal wrote:Your flings are great for the most part, but the alt flings were way too weak, imo.

Try to add more trick variation and such. Wink

Thanks for your advice, nice to know you liked it.

OTDE wrote:Ya'need some airtime, boi!

Besides that, it was very interesting, keep on truckin'. Very Happy

Ok and thanks for the advice.

efrazable wrote:Should it have been someone else, that review would have been followed by "overall, I liked it Linerider: Recession 173596". Overall, I liked it! Linerider: Recession 173596

Ok then, glade to see you like it.

Sssschiller wrote:I really enjoyed it! Just make stronger flings Smile

Thats nice to know, I'm glade you enjoyed it.

Helios Pavonine wrote:Fling after fling with barely any speed variation.

Sorry, but this is not what I expected. Don't make such a hype out of it next time... Or, well, backfire that to me when I release Eden, k?

Ok,ok,ok gees.

SETH wrote:i like all quirk tracks, great job , try to work the speed and trick variation.

Thanks for the advice.

Rafael wrote:FINALLY a good reviewable track! I'll edit this post soon Smile

WAITING!!!

Z_N-Freak wrote:I like this track. I have to say that I am kinda drowsy atm and I just really like the mellow flow. Also, awesome song, though it's not a very mellow song, but it's still freaking awesome Smile

I shall do that next time, glade you like it.

rabid squirrel wrote:win

Ok.

a1c4s8 wrote:Well i enjoyed it. 8D

Nice to hear you liked it.

JoaTrades wrote:Overall all I liked the video.

The flow was good and the trick variety in the track was fairly decent although the track didn't seem all that creative or original. The main flaw with the track in my opinion though is the weakness of some of the wells.

I didn't dislike the music but I didn't feel like it fit the track. It seemed like it would have fit better with a fast that has a lot of pressure/strength, so again the wells could have been stronger. The track felt a little loose and slow for this song.

The editing pretty much just follows the common format for LR videos. I liked the opening and ending titles although the credits were just meh.

I liked the track but the wells could have been stronger and the music didn't fit too well imo.

Thanks for your support and advice I'm glade you liked it.


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Post by linerage Sat Nov 12, 2011 2:19 am

Oks and thanks and thanks for the advices were abused brutally by Stallie.
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Post by Phyxius Sat Nov 12, 2011 2:41 pm

Epic track much!
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