Linerider: Resolution

I finally finished my anniversery for youtube and i present it to you. enjoy



https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5U75m9LiDkU

Oh my gosh, dude. Learn to spell "inspirations".

And as for the track. Not a fan. Gets a bit too repetitive towards the end and it didn't impress me. Try working on one track at time (as it seems you're not doing, judging by your signature) and you'll be able to dedicate more effort into it.

It was okay, but I probably could've enjoyed it better if you made ALL of the wells stronger, instead of SOME. That's probably the problem that you have here. It doesn't look too good if some parts are decent and some are not.

But still, good work

proudly*
anniversary*
inspiration*

track was ok, nothing good or bad to say about it. how in the world was I an inspiration O.o

Not to mention: Leomur*
RevO*
Snooze*
Conundrumer*

I think you just put some random names there...

I didn't like the track. Flow was ok, speed could have been faster for my like, and stack for more power.

Seriously, go back to school. Those spelling mistakes are driving me mad

inspirations looked like they had nothing to do with the track whatsoever, but rather was just a list of all the top riders.

Not bad, you have some nice tricks in there.

You're improving.

I noticed a 2nd position nose fling, Nice. Keep it up.
Just learn to spell.

The flings were great ... XY needed more wells and less air time. Cool.

Don't be so harsh just because of some spelling mistakes (i think i make the same amount in my tracks ) Also why shouldn't he have so many inspiration? He plays for such a long time!

But now to the track i liked it! It had a very nice flow in my eyes and also some flings that i can't do! In the future u should try to put more pressure in the track to use not so many lines.

Nice track, good flings, manuals and pretty good flow
Great work ^^

your track is not so bad, there are lot of good tricks and variation, great work !

I like the variation a whole lot. The flow was slow, and didn't really fit with the song, but it didn't affect the track too much, and was still fine in my opinion. The one thing I could tell you to work on is your manuals. They could be a lot smoother, and I noticed that most of them had a lot of flat parts, making them almost box shape instead of being round and even. Good job with this.

Didn't you say this was your fourth anniversary back during the livestream conversation?

@Rabid your manuals inpsire me, thats why your in my inspirations.
@Opalrider: Its my 5th anniversary for LR, 2nd for youtube.
@Jam Sorry you didn't like, though i do think youd did have something more posetive to say then just that.
@Cereal Thanks for the feed back.
@Wolf_Spirit Thanks for your opinion.
@Sheldon Thanks for pointing that out.
@Linerage Thanks for you feed back and yeah i'm better than i was months ago.
@SETH Thanks for your feedback.
@Sssschiller Your on my (People that made a awesome comment) list, thanks for making my day.
@MSX No they weren't, i was inspired by those people for months while making this track.
@Efrazable I should have made more XY though.
@Heliopavonine Thanks for your helpful comment.

stallie wrote:@Jam Sorry you didn't like, though i do think youd did have something more posetive to say then just that.

Yeah, I do actually. The recording wasn't laggy. That's about it, though.

stallie wrote:@Heliopavonine GTFO, i don't need your negativite.

Excuse me? I'm only being honest and giving you advice about what to improve on.

Helios Pavonine wrote:

stallie wrote:@Heliopavonine GTFO, i don't need your negativite.

Excuse me? I'm only being honest and giving you advice about what to improve on.

Yeah, Helios' right. Take criticism like a man, Stallie. =I

Helios Pavonine wrote:Not to mention: Leomur*
RevO*
Snooze*
Conundrumer*

Pretty sure he meant RovanO, not RevO

rabid squirrel wrote:

Helios Pavonine wrote:Not to mention: Leomur*
RevO*
Snooze*
Conundrumer*

Pretty sure he meant RovanO, not RevO

You know spelling may be a challenge for you if people aren't sure who you're talking about.

OffTheDeepEnd wrote:

rabid squirrel wrote:

Helios Pavonine wrote:Not to mention: Leomur*
RevO*
Snooze*
Conundrumer*

Pretty sure he meant RovanO, not RevO

You know spelling may be a challenge for you if people aren't sure who you're talking about.

Exactly, it was my first guess

rabid squirrel wrote:

Helios Pavonine wrote:Not to mention: Leomur*
RevO*
Snooze*
Conundrumer*

Pretty sure he meant RovanO, not RevO

He's reffered to RevO (currently TheRevTastic) as Revano and Revno many times. Maybe he just doesn't really know who he's talking about.

I'm quite sure he doesn't really know who he's talking about.

I'm quite sure you guys are being douchebags right now. it's his anniversary track, he spent a lot of time making it, and you guys are arguing over the spelling mistakes he made and whether or not his inspirations were relevant. Get over yourselves.

Personally, Stallie, I enjoyed the track, but I think the flings could have been stronger. However, I liked the flow of it all and it was a very solid track. good work!

darklight wrote:I'm quite sure you guys are being douchebags right now. it's his anniversary track, he spent a lot of time making it, and you guys are arguing over the spelling mistakes he made and whether or not his inspirations were relevant. Get over yourselves.

Personally, Stallie, I enjoyed the track, but I think the flings could have been stronger. However, I liked the flow of it all and it was a very solid track. good work!

Look, if he spent a lot of time working on the track, one would imagine he'd at least TRY to spell words and names properly in the video for that very track. If pointing that out or trying to figure out what he meant when he mispelled makes me a douchebag, I'm pretty goddamn proud of being a douchebag.

<<jam

anyways, internet arguments are stupid as hell, never should have posted my opinion. bye