Line Rider - Focus on the Sound

Hello people

I just finished my new Line Rider movie..

So here it is :

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YwenjBOowyk

Please tell me what you think

well your scenery has improved in my opinion, but tbh its not a very enjoyable to watch when it is that short. Take your time making a nice smooth plain track with atleast a minute length and then scene it, don't rush too much.

anyway, like i said, made some improvemtns but still needs a little work, keep it up!!

nice man cool to see that u keep making scened tracks.
In my opinion chaomocha advise is not right. It's pretty hard to scene a track with 1 minute lenght because u are using a scening style with a lot of lines. but of course longer tracks are more enjoyable =)

Nice! I really don't have any critique except it was short and slow. MAKE MORE!!! It's always great to see more scenery tracks.

You did a great job of creating a little world for bosh in this one.

Also, don't worry about quirks when you're making a scenery track. Worry more about the pace of the track and the scenery making sense. Breathtaking Silence has no quirks, or at least very few, and that's regarded as the best scenery track ever.

That was pretty cool man! Some spots seemed kind of random, but in general it was a fine ride!

Scenery was awesome! Really smooth and neat

Although the track was pretty short it fit alright.

make more, longer ones

i'm agree with rabid, make more and try some monument

Me thinks I saw some techdawgg inspiration in there amirite? Very good scenery I must say, although a monument would be nice, and maybe some more speed. Your manuals are pretty balanced though, so good job on that.

Keep posting these! I'm working on my first scenery track, and it's nice to know I am not the only one scening. Here's a tip, if you don't like the way something looks, change it until you have pride in it. Or make it something completely different, possibilities are endless! Another thing, If you feel that your running out of inspiration, call it a night and do something else, you don't want to force it. That's how you can end up getting sloppy.

Like others said, take your time and make at least a 1 minute track. People will enjoy watching it much more. And you won't feel the need to make one every week.

Very nice track as well, the shading definitely improved and it had more diversity.

Mhm, I like it

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Really amazing scenery!

I really liked the bold lines! It was kinda short, but I enjoyed it.

Keep that scenery alive!

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It was very short, but I thought your scenery was very well-executed. Try to work more on your tracks.

I like the scenery, and also you should probable work on those manuals and the smoothness of them as well.