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Post by ~rawr Thu Dec 30, 2010 10:26 pm

Little preview of sometin sometin 8D

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yea...
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Post by linerage Fri Dec 31, 2010 12:09 am

nice Very Happy be sure to add some circular manuals, because that's what people like the most about manuals, im pretty sure xD
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Post by ~rawr Fri Dec 31, 2010 12:13 am

linerage wrote:nice Very Happy be sure to add some circular manuals, because that's what people like the most about manuals, im pretty sure xD

Thats not my style...so meh xD I'm at 52 seconds now

20 seconds in one sitting tonight 8D
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Post by Lankher Fri Dec 31, 2010 7:04 am

i see that smooth curves isnt your style either..
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Post by Rafael Fri Dec 31, 2010 7:11 am

@ linerage I like manuals if they're smooth, not if the curves are smooth.
Anyway, it's looking good, but try to go up and down some more! This is mostly going left and right.
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Post by Helios Pavonine Fri Dec 31, 2010 8:29 am

It is proven that circular or round objects are more preferred than angular objects, in general.

You're just a beginner, so I won't be very harsh. Looks good.
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Post by KillinTime2792 Fri Dec 31, 2010 9:43 am

Podpack wrote:It is proven that circular or round objects are more preferred than angular objects
that's not what she said!
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Post by rabid squirrel Fri Dec 31, 2010 12:09 pm

Podpack wrote:You're just a beginner, so I won't be very harsh. Looks good.
:facepalm:
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Post by Lankher Fri Dec 31, 2010 12:32 pm

rabid squirrel wrote:
Podpack wrote:You're just a beginner, so I won't be very harsh. Looks good.
:facepalm:


Rabid, i see way too much spam posts from you, they don't do any good, so just stfu if you dont have anything to say
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Post by Derpinator Fri Dec 31, 2010 12:34 pm

WOW, thats really brave of you Lankher (see, i spelled it right)

To Podpack, :facepalm:

To preview, try to make your curves more smooth, it looks like its going to contain manuals, which is a big improvement compared to your last track Smile
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Post by ~rawr Fri Dec 31, 2010 12:38 pm

^ My last track was for the lulz :|
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Post by rabid squirrel Fri Dec 31, 2010 1:16 pm

Rapto wrote:WOW, thats really brave of you Lankher
naw, just troll
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Post by Helios Pavonine Fri Dec 31, 2010 1:20 pm

Why is my post facepalm-able? :facepalm:

EDIT: At least LineRage understood me, he only put it in SIMPLER and EASIER TO UNDERSTAND words. :|


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Post by linerage Fri Dec 31, 2010 1:22 pm

meh, when a new guy made manuals that weren't circular/smooth, everyone goes "I don't see the big idea, this isn't such a good track", and when it's circular, like the one ipi had, everyone was like "ay ay ay that is dammmmmmmm smooooth yo, +rep+fav+sub like man that is awesome -writes big review-" that's what i've observed.
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Post by Cereal Fri Dec 31, 2010 1:25 pm

Podpack wrote:
You're just a beginner, so I won't be very harsh. Looks good.

Yeah! Listen to PodPack! He is a senior member and has been here for years, and doesn't afraid of anything! 8D

srs: iliek, finish eet. Some times manuals are smoother when the curve itself is unsmooth, you'd be surprised. It all depends on pressure of the manuals. Forget about curve smoothness, just make sure that the pressure of the manuals is really strong and consistent.
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Post by rabid squirrel Fri Dec 31, 2010 1:38 pm

Podpack wrote:Why is my post facepalm-able? :facepalm:
he's an older member than you are? And where's your track that shows you to be experienced?

EDIT: not to mention that your post was rather disparaging. "I won't be too harsh, so all I can say is that it was 'good' (which is probably the lamest compliment possible)"


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Post by linerage Fri Dec 31, 2010 1:51 pm

xD @ podpack , i suppose you are just too sophisticated.

EDIT: lul sounds sarcastic.
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Post by Helios Pavonine Fri Dec 31, 2010 4:36 pm

So I can't say ''you're a beginner'' when I'm a beginner too?

I didn't MEAN it like that, it just comes over like that at you guys. :| And who can't disagree with me he's just a beginner? Also, ''looks good'' is positive, not negative. IF I would be honest, I would say something like ''it looks horrible, work on your sense of circularity, and try to make the track more interesting by adding more tricks''. You all think I'm just a darn troll who comments on tracks like he's pro and knows everything and is perfect, or something, but I'm not that person. I DO have experience with LR, I've seen enough good LR tracks and bad LR tracks to know what's actually good about it and what not. Now, who's the one who's harsh?
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Post by linerage Fri Dec 31, 2010 4:42 pm

...you...? :facepalm: cause... you were being harsh..?
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Post by Rafael Fri Dec 31, 2010 4:49 pm

I don't see why you're all attacking Podpack. He's right. If I look at this preview and take the LCC standards, it'd suck. If I look at this preview and I take the standards of someone who is relatively new and I've seen some manuals from and stuff, then this is a really good track with a lot of improvement.
I don't get where the "smoother curves" comments come from. When you guys started LR you never made a smooth curve. Neither did I. It doesn't make any sense to give that as criticism to a relatively new person. Before giving criticism, look at the person you're giving critique to, like Podpack.
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Post by linerage Fri Dec 31, 2010 5:26 pm

yea, but we just told him people like circles more than uncircular stuff. And we told him to TRY to do it, but it's good for new people's standards already...
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Post by rabid squirrel Fri Dec 31, 2010 5:53 pm

Sorry, I didn't mean to attack Podpack. Sorry if it came across that way.
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Post by Rafael Fri Dec 31, 2010 5:57 pm

linerage wrote:yea, but we just told him people like circles more than uncircular stuff. And we told him to TRY to do it, but it's good for new people's standards already...
My point is that this is totally irrelevant if you just learned a manual to perfect your curves.
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Post by Helios Pavonine Fri Dec 31, 2010 6:03 pm

Nevermind everyone.

It's all sorted now. :|
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Post by Sheldon Fri Dec 31, 2010 6:05 pm

I see (some) Potential Thumbs Up and how do you get -242 rep Eep
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