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Post by Wolf_Spirit Fri Jun 18, 2010 8:32 am

Well I'm going to get this to at least a minuite for TOC.....going to be hard to finish this before the deadline.....ah well ^^ So it's going to be an oriental theme. Yeah...I got for a bit of realism at the start but I want your opinion, do you like realism or abstract? I'm going to add abstract later anyways...so here's the first pic and I will update my progress like once so ya...here's the pic:
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Post by Purtle Fri Jun 18, 2010 8:51 am

The cliffs sort of bother me. The tree does too. Not really the leave part of the tree, but just the shape of the tree, jutting out from the side like that. That bottom hook part of it probably bothers me the most.

I really like the bridge though.

The clouds are..okay. They are different. Sometimes i don't like the shading on the clouds though at parts.
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Post by Wolf_Spirit Fri Jun 18, 2010 8:56 am

Purtle wrote:The cliffs sort of bother me. The tree does too. Not really the leave part of the tree, but just the shape of the tree, jutting out from the side like that. That bottom hook part of it probably bothers me the most.

I really like the bridge though.

The clouds are..okay. They are different. Sometimes i don't like the shading on the clouds though at parts.
Ah the tree, it's a bonsai, they grow like that :P The cliffs I was wondering if I should shade them or not...they bother me too but I don't want to go with the TD cliffs so I'm just going with what I've got.
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Post by GhostY Fri Jun 18, 2010 9:30 am

i really like it, very creative and a thinking outside of the box look ^^

Keep that mix of realism and abstract it goes together well :3
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Post by rabid squirrel Fri Jun 18, 2010 10:06 am

I like the simplicity Smile
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Post by Rafael Fri Jun 18, 2010 10:54 am

I love it, it's actually 3D!
But I see a badly scened line Suspicious
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Post by Wolf_Spirit Fri Jun 18, 2010 10:59 am

Rafael wrote:I love it, it's actually 3D!
But I see a badly scened line Suspicious
oh shizzle! Badly scened line?! Where?!
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Post by Kohuda Fri Jun 18, 2010 12:26 pm

Rafael wrote:I love it, it's actually 3D!
But I see a badly scened line Suspicious

I wouldn't say that it's 3D, but it has a nice shape to it.
Looks brillllliant, can't wait to see some more. 8D
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Post by rabid squirrel Fri Jun 18, 2010 12:28 pm

wolf_spirit wrote:
Rafael wrote:I love it, it's actually 3D!
But I see a badly scened line Suspicious
oh shizzle! Badly scened line?! Where?!
Here:
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Actually, this is scened worse:
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Post by Wolf_Spirit Fri Jun 18, 2010 12:34 pm

I shall remove the first one, and the second one isn't scened yet, it's like the starting g-well or something, I was thinking of doing some japaese writing there.
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Post by Cereal Fri Jun 18, 2010 2:33 pm

looks great, it's simple, yet effective.

Just work on the clouds a bit, they looked a bit... strange.

(Also, I see a badly scened line Suspicious)
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Post by CamQuartr Fri Jun 18, 2010 4:37 pm

looks pretty awesome.

And what rabid pointed out, seamed awkward for me aswell

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