Linerider-300 Lines in 30 Seconds

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Linerider-300 Lines in 30 Seconds

Post by theacp127 on Fri Mar 16, 2012 10:47 pm

A 30 second track with 300 lines. I've been making short tracks lately to practice flow. I have trouble getting the movements to look "fluid". Anyway, enjoy my track. Inverted Onoz


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Re: Linerider-300 Lines in 30 Seconds

Post by RyderLR on Fri Mar 16, 2012 10:51 pm

haha great track, reminds me of me Very Happy for it to look more "fluid", try not to have weak wells going up all of the time, make stronger wells by stacking

not sure if this helps much but keep making tracks! Very Happy

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Re: Linerider-300 Lines in 30 Seconds

Post by weebit on Fri Mar 16, 2012 10:55 pm

Flow will come with time and experience, there is no way around it.

But other than that, for your first few tracks. You're doing pretty good.
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Re: Linerider-300 Lines in 30 Seconds

Post by chaomocha on Fri Mar 16, 2012 10:56 pm

the ending gave me a chuckle haha. I think its cool that you're challenging yourself (read your youtube), giving yourself measurable goals, not many people do that as a way to practice. Indeed some bits were a bit bumpy and not so fluid but its always a good idea to replay your track often, sometimes after every line you draw, and see if what you just added to your track also adds to the fluidity and smoothness of your track. Unless of course your making a track purposely bumpy or just could care less about the smoothness of looks of it, then just go for it xD!! Keep it up!

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Re: Linerider-300 Lines in 30 Seconds

Post by WishLine on Sat Mar 17, 2012 5:22 am

You're demonstrating a fine ability to use basic quirks that you seem to have picked up rapidly. I'm pleased with how much you've come on. I would say its rather stop-start at the moment. Continuous movement is something to aim for. Also, a nice stall to finish your track. An off sled splat agains a line may be amusing, but looks a bit careless, maybe? I don't know.

Anyway, you're still doing well and I still want you making tracks!

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Re: Linerider-300 Lines in 30 Seconds

Post by Cereal on Sat Mar 17, 2012 11:36 am

As I think someone else mentioned in this thread, you get a feel for flow with experience. For now, it's important to just practice manuals and basic flings.

I started with just manual tracks, because I think that they are quicker and easier to make than quirk (for the most part).

I can tell you're experimenting, though. Thumbs Up

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