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Post by Sheldon on Mon Jan 02, 2012 8:49 pm

Centrifugal XY

This is it guys. I am sorry to disappoint. Every time I open standalone I work on it for a minute, or give up completely. The project was just to big of an undertaking. I am now typing this completely uninspired. I may finish this one day, just no time soon. I apologize for the credits error. The rest said: Thanks to aspi33 for conversation, and advice on this track. Comments and reviews are greatly appreciated. Please don't say "Where is the style?" or "No style." I got caught up in glory, and ended up being lost in boredom. This has No Style.


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Post by efrazable on Mon Jan 02, 2012 9:00 pm

Powerful. Dang, Sheldon!

The directional variety was great, and it was very dense and fast!

Had it been longer, a feature for sure!

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Post by Votale on Mon Jan 02, 2012 9:03 pm

Honestly, I just say some bouncing around really fast with intense music. While I was watching, I thought "Would I rather watch this or Meerkat?" I answered Meerkat because it felt more enjoyable and actually watchable.

I say that and the following for a reason. You and some others have said before that you have fun by "pushing it to the limit with power." Look where you're at now... Completely uninspired and overwhelmed. It doesn't look like fun. I say that because I advise to to not focus on speed and stuff like that, like you obviously did in this track, and have REAL fun. The kind that makes you want to play the game, not feel like you do now.

Now I say all that not to say this track sucks, it's crazy indeed and powerful + speedy, but I say that so you'll do things which will lead to you continuing playing Line Rider. Kudos on the track Smile May you become more inspired in the future and make more sweet tracks!
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Post by Cereal on Mon Jan 02, 2012 9:04 pm

Well that was a track!

I was really hoping for a gangsta omni, but damn.... that XY was just.... I couldn't even tell you what just happened. Also, thanks @ the shoutout <3

Oh, and zoom in more on the recording next time :P

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Post by Rafael on Mon Jan 02, 2012 9:12 pm

Hm, kinda what I expected.. Didn't flow together, just trying to make Bosh move as fast as possible. I did like 0:30 - 0:32 though, because that actually build up to something, but that's it.
You should make tracks more "from the heart" instead of trying to be impressive. Valance was a showoff of your skills, and Silhouette was a showoff of how you can other things than tricks. At least, that's the feeling I get when watching these tracks. This also looks like a showoff. Make whatever you want instead of what (you think) the audience wants.
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Post by Guest on Mon Jan 02, 2012 11:47 pm

words from the wise:

Pure Skill all the time =\= fun. It makes more people (including you) Unispired and not want to play anymore.

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@Conundrumer wrote:Well yea, this is really awesome.
Admittedly, though, it makes me not want to play Line Rider because of the amount of time I have to invest to be up to par with today's standards.

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@Rafael wrote:Hm, kinda what I expected.. Didn't flow together, just trying to make Bosh move as fast as possible. I did like 0:30 - 0:32 though, because that actually build up to something, but that's it.
You should make tracks more "from the heart" instead of trying to be impressive. Valance was a showoff of your skills, and Silhouette was a showoff of how you can other things than tricks. At least, that's the feeling I get when watching these tracks. This also looks like a showoff. Make whatever you want instead of what (you think) the audience wants.

^ this.

Also, No airtime what so ever and the only basic tricks were the two pinches and the tail/nose manual. =/

The first CF was better.

Try taking a break and make some of dem ram tzu silk road stuff from time to time (or something else just for the hell of it) while making a skilled track. It helps ease your mind off the track and eases the pressure and stress off since you knew that by releasing a preview a lot of people are expecting it to be really good. This also helps give you time to receive more inspiration.

Also I'm pretty sure you didn't finish this either because you ran out of inspiration because you couldn't figure out what else to put in the track or because you got sick of trying to get perfect g-wells. With either case I recommend doing what I said above.

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Post by rabid squirrel on Tue Jan 03, 2012 12:24 am

That was really intense. most intense XY ever. Not my favorite XY, but really impressive. Reminded me of lukking a lot xD

too much hate criticism going on in this thread

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Post by linerage on Tue Jan 03, 2012 12:55 am

what just happened

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Post by automatizer on Tue Jan 03, 2012 11:59 am

this is an awesome track man! but also:

@Rafael wrote:You should make tracks more "from the heart" instead of trying to be impressive. Valance was a showoff of your skills, and Silhouette was a showoff of how you can other things than tricks. At least, that's the feeling I get when watching these tracks. This also looks like a showoff. Make whatever you want instead of what (you think) the audience wants.

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Post by KillinTime2792 on Tue Jan 03, 2012 12:24 pm

scan 1:05 to see the price for buying this track.

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Post by Orthuss on Tue Jan 03, 2012 1:21 pm

What. This is really, really awesome. XY pushed to the max. Still, I'm a tad saddened that this is such a high standard to reach. Sheldon, I'd suggest you should finish this, but I'd agree with Raf that you should make more tracks from the heart.

@KillinTime2792 wrote:scan 1:05 to see the price for buying this track.

I wish I had a scanner now :|
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Post by SETH on Tue Jan 03, 2012 3:47 pm

wow! i never seen a xy track like that ! it's just awesome !!

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Post by Stallie on Tue Jan 03, 2012 3:59 pm

Dude that is awesome, good start with the XY, its gold. Wink
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Post by hypothet on Tue Jan 03, 2012 4:17 pm

I find this really funny.

'Cuz this is my favorite track from you.

No joke. Smile

Great ideas and all.

I would have died in joy had the omni come out, but I can feel your pain about that uninspiration bit.

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Post by WTB on Tue Jan 03, 2012 4:42 pm

@Rafael wrote:Hm, kinda what I expected.. Didn't flow together, just trying to make Bosh move as fast as possible. I did like 0:30 - 0:32 though, because that actually build up to something, but that's it.

This is why I no longer play line rider (much). I swear, the quality of a track is proportional to the criticism you get now days.

This was amazing. And that's that. Amazing.
This is one of those moments where I sit back and say to myself, "Wow, I can't make that, and I respect this person for the abilities he just displayed"


Look, I'm not trying to say skills are everything guys, but open your mind a little; he worked hard.
And I'm not trying to make Rafael look like a bad person, because he's not. In fact, you're all great people.

But the growing tensions between the two extremes of these types of conflicts is why I'm finding myself visiting these forums less and less. So what if the standard has changed? I do my own dabbling, and that makes me happy. My neighbor constructs a masterpiece, and that makes him happy.


Sorry if I come off as irritated, I don't mean to deviate the topic of sheldon's post. I'm just trying to be unbiased, and that's what I'm always trying to do.

As a side note, I wouldn't abbreviate this CF2, it might cause some confusion in any future discussion


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Post by SPL4SHZ0N3 on Tue Jan 03, 2012 4:49 pm

The most technically-advanced track ever made.

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Post by Sheldon on Tue Jan 03, 2012 4:56 pm

Guys, I will be trying my best to make a longer version by Toc3. I can't promise anything though.
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Post by Rafael on Tue Jan 03, 2012 5:02 pm

@WTB wrote:This is those moments where I sit back and say to myself, "Wow, I can't make that, and I respect this person for the abilities he just displayed"

But the growing tensions between the two extremes of these types of conflicts is why I'm finding myself visiting these forums less and less. So what if the standard has changed? I do my own dabbling, and that makes me happy. My neighbor constructs a masterpiece, and that makes him happy.
Yeah I understand some people are amazed by this. I don't want to brag, but I CAN make this. Therefore I am not amazed by the speed and pace of this track. For me, it's the execution of the tricks and the flow that make skillful tracks stand out, and not the complexity of the tricks.
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Post by Helios Pavonine on Tue Jan 03, 2012 5:07 pm

It gave me chills. So intense, so many powerful movements. I'm stunned by your skills.

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Post by Sssschiller on Tue Jan 03, 2012 6:47 pm

Everytime I watch one of your tracks I think: "Damnit, he's has skills like a line god, now he just has to learn how to use them." Wink
The way you speed bosh is insane! It looks like a hax version of line rider. I have no clue how you do that 8D
But man, I really dislike this track xD maybe it's also the zoom level and the music. There are no chill moments in this track for me. It almost hurts my eyes watching this speed. This track is like watching the film Crank on 4 screens at the same time Very Happy

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Post by rabid squirrel on Tue Jan 03, 2012 8:17 pm

This thread reminds me of The River, except it's a lot of people instead of basically just me.

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Post by Cereal on Tue Jan 03, 2012 8:46 pm

@rabid squirrel wrote:This thread reminds me of The River, except it's a lot of people instead of basically just me.

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Post by pure5152 on Tue Jan 03, 2012 10:19 pm

This track reminds me of a geode. The gems are there, you just have to dig a little deeper to find them. I adored this track, sheldon. I liked all the fast rotations and variations of tricks. The epic factor was there. I enjoyed it
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Post by CamQuartr on Tue Jan 03, 2012 10:24 pm

@Sssschiller wrote:This track is like watching the film Crank on 4 screens at the same time Very Happy
awesome comparison xD

I think that it was a really interesting start. Its a shame you didn't get to finish, but what you had was really impressive!

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Post by rabid squirrel on Wed Jan 04, 2012 1:55 am

@Cereal wrote:
@rabid squirrel wrote:This thread reminds me of The River, except it's a lot of people instead of basically just me.
wat
All these quotes reminded me of my reaction to The River:
@Votale wrote:Honestly, I just say some bouncing around really fast with intense music. While I was watching, I thought "Would I rather watch this or Meerkat?" I answered Meerkat because it felt more enjoyable and actually watchable.
@Votale wrote:I advise to to not focus on speed and stuff
@Rafael wrote:Hm, kinda what I expected.. Didn't flow together, just trying to make Bosh move as fast as possible.
@Rafael wrote:This looks like a showoff.
Kramwood wrote:Pure Skill all the time =\= fun
@Rafael wrote:I am not amazed by the speed and pace of this track. For me, it's the execution of the tricks and the flow that make skillful tracks stand out, and not the complexity of the tricks.
To be honest, I feel like I was the guy who drove Hedge from Line Rider and I'm still trying to figure out why I reacted to that track the way I did. I think about it a lot. So this thread just reminded me of it. Not saying you can really compare these tracks, they're very different.

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