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Linerider: Resolution

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Post by Sssschiller Thu Jul 14, 2011 5:19 pm

Sad that we all never learned how to make smart and usefull comments on line rider tracks (me too, because I'm offtopic)
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Post by Stallie Thu Jul 14, 2011 8:28 pm

Sorry HP, i guess in a way you did have good advice, thanks. Smile
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Post by Helios Pavonine Fri Jul 15, 2011 7:16 am

Sssschiller wrote:Sad that we all never learned how to make smart and usefull comments on line rider tracks (me too, because I'm offtopic)

What? There are people who are able to give constructive (useful) criticism. It doesn't matter we're being off-topic, I feel like things should be sorted out and not left dying.
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Post by CamQuartr Fri Jul 15, 2011 9:53 pm

I would recommend working on the pressure of your manuals and the power of your gwells/flings

otherwise it was decent I guess, i dunno there really isn't much to say about this...

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Post by Georgio_jc Sat Jul 16, 2011 4:57 am

I guess I'll give it a shot at criticism.

I really liked the track. The music didn't fit very well, since the track was rather slow paced compared to the song. That might just be me thought.
As for the track itself, it sort of reminded me of my first quirk stuff, which is really fun to watch for me =) If you want to give your tracks a little more power, give you gwells more strength. Many flings in there seemed like they could have had way more pull.
At the XY section I realized that it was missing some flings. Try fooling around with XY flings a little and you'll realize that there's a certain recipe for it. Thumbs Up
For the rest of the track, I wish there were more manuals :3 (again just my preference haha) I just love manuals bro =D

Really sweet track, Stallie. Keep 'em coming mate!
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