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Post by Pinter Sat Jul 09, 2011 3:52 am

Hey everyone

A month ago I finished a track, called Moth Made.
It's not my latest track.

I wanna know what you think about it :



And here are some links of my other tracks i made before this one:
A naked track: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2n9KSZbxU_8
A halfdone scened track: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CQrtjG4DAAo
And my first track i ever made Smile : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=euhNfN5FEt8

This is my newest, but I allready showed you this track:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zjx0hV1Wm1w

Hope you enjoy!
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Post by Sheldon Sat Jul 09, 2011 9:34 am

Reminds me of Dapoe keep it up.
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Post by Stallie Sat Jul 09, 2011 1:38 pm

That was pretty good and nice matching the sync. Moth Made 232659
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Post by CamQuartr Sun Jul 10, 2011 3:04 pm

haha, I can tell it was very inspired by Millennium by DaPoe

Pretty neat track - I can definitely tell you are improving alot!

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Post by SETH Tue Jul 12, 2011 3:28 pm

lot of dapoe and sorvius inspiration, but nice track
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Post by Wolf_Spirit Tue Jul 12, 2011 3:31 pm

CamQuartr wrote:haha, I can tell it was very inspired by Millennium by DaPoe
^ That Very Happy
You had some smooth and well done scenery in there ^^ However you had him riding inside objects a few times. Scenery looks better if you avoid riding inside scenery objects. Very well done on your scenery, you should make more ^^
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Post by Pinter Tue Jul 12, 2011 3:44 pm

now i'm making a speed manual, but i think it's not smooth enough :P

thanx for the comments :P, i knew it is riding in opbjects and stuff.. Very Happy and i always forget my inspiration :$
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Post by Opal Rider Tue Jul 12, 2011 5:57 pm

Millenium No. 2! I saw a whole lot of dapoe in there. Love this track, man, you're gonna be really good someday. Try to work on flow killers. When I say that, I'm talking about the stuff like at 0:33, where he just does the same stuff over and over. But anywho, your scenery is awesome, keep playing. Smile
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