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Post by Diotoxin Sun Jun 02, 2013 11:52 am

Yeah, so... this is my first try at any type of scenery. It took me a good few hours.



should i keep doing scenery?

thanks to shotoku for recording for me <3

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Post by Diotoxin Sun Jun 02, 2013 11:58 am

sorry, should be fixed
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Post by roflmaoqwerty Sun Jun 02, 2013 12:03 pm

That was very nice! Riding inside objects was kept to a minimum, and the things you drew were pretty cool. The only thing was that it sort of lacked a cohesive theme that ran throughout the track. By all means, though, if you enjoy making scenery, keep doing it; this is awesome Thumbs Up
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Post by Opal Rider Sun Jun 02, 2013 3:30 pm

There were very few things that I could actually say needed more thought to it. One would be floating objects, although there were very few of those. Another was just thinking about proportion with objects, as in, those trees near the very bottom should almost certainly be bigger than that face up there. As for the good aspects, it does have a very clean look to it, and you're pretty good at keeping your curves smoothish. Good luck with scenery, man!
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Post by Diotoxin Sun Jun 02, 2013 3:42 pm

@Opal, I was actually thinking about those trees, and I'm glad you noticed, the only reason that I even put them there was just for like a metaphorical sense. Thanks!

@rofl, cohesiveness noted. Thanks man Very Happy
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