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Post by Hotflash Wed May 25, 2011 2:10 pm



https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=smIA1dXoVjQ

Sry for lame beginning.. didnt plan on making it a track in the beginning..
Enjoy it and plz give feedback Smile
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Post by Wolf_Spirit Wed May 25, 2011 3:03 pm

You are improving at a really high rate :3
Your manuals are more consistent and your flings and wells are looking fantastic ^^
I saw an alt-fling in there, well done with that, you placed it really well Very Happy You had pretty good flow near the start, however at...0:43 you killed the flow a little with the headriding. Try to avoid that in tracks ^^
I loved the monument, it looked really good and you ended with a kramual Very Happy Really great stuff my friend +rep ^^
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Post by Sheldon Wed May 25, 2011 4:17 pm

Just a guess you are gonna be a really good manual rider you are improving at a sheldon-high rate
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Post by Stallie Wed May 25, 2011 4:18 pm

That was pretty good, try to smooth out your manuals a little more and try to spread you verity of your flings.
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Post by Hotflash Wed May 25, 2011 4:47 pm

Wolf_Spirit wrote:You are improving at a really high rate :3
Your manuals are more consistent and your flings and wells are looking fantastic ^^
I saw an alt-fling in there, well done with that, you placed it really well Very Happy You had pretty good flow near the start, however at...0:43 you killed the flow a little with the headriding. Try to avoid that in tracks ^^
I loved the monument, it looked really good and you ended with a kramual Very Happy Really great stuff my friend +rep ^^
Im rly glad u liked my monument Very Happy.. i was well aware of the flowkiller at 0:43, i began with the idea of recycling, but i was too lazy and made him headriding instead Sad

Sheldon wrote:Just a guess you are gonna be a really good manual rider you are improving at a sheldon-high rate

+rep for making me laugh Very Happy

stallie wrote:That was pretty good, try to smooth out your manuals a little more and try to spread you verity of your flings.

ty Smile
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Post by SETH Thu May 26, 2011 12:22 pm

very good track ! keep it up
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Post by Cereal Thu May 26, 2011 4:42 pm

*mutes* much better

You've got some decent nose manuals, but I think you should try to add more tail manuals as well. I also like the old school gravity wells in thar Smile

I see some potential.

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Post by rabid squirrel Thu May 26, 2011 10:33 pm

Holy crap you're improving fast! :O
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Post by SPL4SHZ0N3 Fri May 27, 2011 4:27 am

Amazingly fast progress so far, can't wait for more!
Looking great. Smile
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