Solar - HotFlash
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Stallie
Sheldon
Wolf_Spirit
Hotflash
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Solar - HotFlash
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=smIA1dXoVjQ
Sry for lame beginning.. didnt plan on making it a track in the beginning..
Enjoy it and plz give feedback
Hotflash- Member
Re: Solar - HotFlash
You are improving at a really high rate :3
Your manuals are more consistent and your flings and wells are looking fantastic ^^
I saw an alt-fling in there, well done with that, you placed it really well You had pretty good flow near the start, however at...0:43 you killed the flow a little with the headriding. Try to avoid that in tracks ^^
I loved the monument, it looked really good and you ended with a kramual Really great stuff my friend +rep ^^
Your manuals are more consistent and your flings and wells are looking fantastic ^^
I saw an alt-fling in there, well done with that, you placed it really well You had pretty good flow near the start, however at...0:43 you killed the flow a little with the headriding. Try to avoid that in tracks ^^
I loved the monument, it looked really good and you ended with a kramual Really great stuff my friend +rep ^^
Wolf_Spirit- Member
- Retired Admin
Re: Solar - HotFlash
Just a guess you are gonna be a really good manual rider you are improving at a sheldon-high rate
Re: Solar - HotFlash
That was pretty good, try to smooth out your manuals a little more and try to spread you verity of your flings.
Stallie- Member
Re: Solar - HotFlash
Im rly glad u liked my monument .. i was well aware of the flowkiller at 0:43, i began with the idea of recycling, but i was too lazy and made him headriding insteadWolf_Spirit wrote:You are improving at a really high rate :3
Your manuals are more consistent and your flings and wells are looking fantastic ^^
I saw an alt-fling in there, well done with that, you placed it really well You had pretty good flow near the start, however at...0:43 you killed the flow a little with the headriding. Try to avoid that in tracks ^^
I loved the monument, it looked really good and you ended with a kramual Really great stuff my friend +rep ^^
Sheldon wrote:Just a guess you are gonna be a really good manual rider you are improving at a sheldon-high rate
+rep for making me laugh
stallie wrote:That was pretty good, try to smooth out your manuals a little more and try to spread you verity of your flings.
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Hotflash- Member
Re: Solar - HotFlash
*mutes* much better
You've got some decent nose manuals, but I think you should try to add more tail manuals as well. I also like the old school gravity wells in thar
I see some potential.
You've got some decent nose manuals, but I think you should try to add more tail manuals as well. I also like the old school gravity wells in thar
I see some potential.
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