Nose Rider 2.0

Very nice.. i liked the first 20 sec especially much.. but more tail manuals like lankher said

Thanks. theyare kinda hard but ill definetly add more in new tracks

First of all, let me be the first to say, Welcome to the site, i'm the next newest member to you , second, i've been getting a lot of positive feedback, and id agree with all the experienced lineriders, add more tail manuals, and i don't know if you enjoy it, but i like to see some granuals. those always look nice, and finally, if you name the track nose manuals, maybe try ending in a nose manual stall?. Great track though, looks like i got competition as the beginner

boom12n wrote:First of all, let me be the first to say, Welcome to the site, i'm the next newest member to you , second, i've been getting a lot of positive feedback, and id agree with all the experienced lineriders, add more tail manuals, and i don't know if you enjoy it, but i like to see some granuals. those always look nice, and finally, if you name the track nose manuals, maybe try ending in a nose manual stall?. Great track though, looks like i got competition as the beginner

definetly agreed with granual part...
and if u dont know what some of the tricks he said is, then youtube it ..
and yes welcome ^^ keep playing

It was pretty good, just keep practicing those manuals and espacilly those tail manuals.

Angels and Airwaves amirite? Good taste in music.

Nice to see you have basic nose manuals down! Those took me forever to get the hang of before. Try to make tracks that are less linear, and sometimes overlap areas which you have already been in.

Keep practicing those manuals, and look up tutorials (there are a bunch on youtube) for any help!

to reply to all of you. i am currently making one now with lots of tail manuals. but i dont know what a granual is so ill look it up now

Aside from what others said, try to make the track less monodirectional. Everything was going to the left, and it got a little repetative. try to go to the right as well.

definetly agreed with granual part...
and if u dont know what some of the tricks he said is, then youtube it ..
and yes welcome ^^ keep playing

Haha hotflash im pretty sure your the one who told me about granuals, but i had no idea so i did exactly that, youtube ftw ty!

Very good manuals, they're pretty balanced ^^
I liked the part where bosh went over those...urm...waves, if you get which part I mean =P
You have some pretty good nose manual skills so great work!
Improvements:
You've already said you're going to make a track with tail manuals, so awesome ^^
You can try to make your curves more equal. And by that I mean you had a straight line then a small curve then a straight line again, there's nothing really wrong with this, it just doesn't look too pleasing to the eye in my opinion
Finally, try to vary the directions bosh goes in your tracks. I saw that you tried him going to the left a little, that's great ^^
So overall, you have some great skills and good luck with your next track

they were some epic shizzle nose manuals. I'd +rep you if i could.

also my fav. part was 0:26

a good suggestion would be to only record the LR window, and if you need to record in full screen, press command S and save the LR.swf so you can play offline

The track was neat, good pressure on some of the manuals