Aftertaste - Orthuss

After sitting on this track for several weeks, I finally decided to record it. With better recording this time, after the feedback I got last time. (lol)
Editing was a little rushed though, and the song wasn't really my first choice.
As for the track itself... I'm happy with the beginning more than the rest of the track, nuff said.

Here's the track:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a8z1_fAsSHw

Please post any suggestions on how I can improve.

wow that was good! i liked how each line affected bosh. But don't try to stall on xy, unless it's like one temp stall every fifty seconds or something. unless you're mj or .boo, u cant achieve stop n' gos with stalling. just try to break his flow by putting a line that he would just like get squished on. (Idunnoifimadesense)

+rep, and ill be done in maybe like a week more or so... if not can i cut off the time a bit?

It's kay, just take as long as you want. And thanks I'll def try to listen to that.

Great XY!

It went a little slow, and I think it would have been better if Bosh rotated more.

The music was great,btw.

BASSHUNTA!!!!!!!
see yt comment...

Thanks for putting me in the credits!

At The Netherlands we have a version of this song too, but it's about a boat... Anyway, not a very bad track. Try to improve the flow, speed, and rotation.

Nice track.
My main suggestion is to speed it up. If you can keep the rotation and tricks going with the speed you'll be golden.

BTW my track for this battle is about half done. I'll try to finish it soon.