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Post by rich Sun Jun 21, 2009 2:28 am

I made this about 2 months ago it has my first alt fling in it i thought i might put it on youtube hope you like it

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UG-Alcb3ums&feature=channel_page
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Post by Cereal Sun Jun 21, 2009 7:41 am

That was really good!

The flow was pretty consistent, only problems were some flow killers.

Also, grats on 1st alt fling.
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Post by LineMagiX Sun Jun 21, 2009 8:08 am

Nice stuff. Smile Alot of it was a bit sloppy though, such as one of the granuals/flanuals and most of your flings. There was a flow killer after the manual recycle. That's just about all i have to say. Keep it up!
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Post by Purtle Sun Jun 21, 2009 3:55 pm

Solid track.
Grats on watnot.

It's not a flow killer, its a pace killer. Pace and flow are different and they^ don't know what they are talking about :p. Ya that slow part kinda ruined the pace but owell.

I don't think the song fit that well either, but whatever.
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