Running to the sea - Hanuman

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Running to the sea - Hanuman

Post by Hanuman on Fri May 26, 2017 11:32 am




Supposed to be working but I make this instead...

As before good headphones /speakers

And feedback welcomed.

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Post by SethComposerGuy on Fri May 26, 2017 2:03 pm

Nice. I can see your skill is improving fast. Also, I'm really digging the animated sections of this track, however those long sections of flat sledding towards the end of the track got a bit boring after a bit with not much going on there. Otherwise I really enjoyed it.

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Re: Running to the sea - Hanuman

Post by Hanuman on Fri May 26, 2017 2:07 pm

Hey thanks man
Yeah it was quite a long song and I got a bit lazy on that flat bit

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Post by Apple on Fri May 26, 2017 2:11 pm

This stuff is crazy, dude. I am so impressed with you. I've never seen someone jump into animation so early into releasing tracks and I think that's really cool.

I'll try and think of some feedback later on, but this stuff is great. Keep it up!

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Re: Running to the sea - Hanuman

Post by Hanuman on Fri May 26, 2017 2:24 pm

Thx Apple!

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Post by Sheldon on Sun May 28, 2017 10:06 pm

Alright, so the animated and high speed bits were very good, but also keep variation in mind. Most were faux flatsled rolls. Try and include other things, maybe some nose manuals, tail manuals, etc. Many of your gwell curves seemed a bit rudimentary, if you would like tips developing them into true chains and flings I am available to help. If it was intentional it didn't feel very tasteful and felt a bit rushed. All and all it was great track considering the small amount of tracks you have made, all of these things can be refined with practice. I look forward to helping and for further releases. Very Happy
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Post by Hanuman on Mon May 29, 2017 5:45 am

Yeah man you are totally right for some of the track, especially towards the end, I need to chose shorter songs or not do the whole song. I also agree my gravity wells and flings suck atm haha. I'll probs hit you up soon I have an idea for a much smoother track but am too busy to work on it atm.

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