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Crossed the Line

Post by ScrungleBlumpkus on Sat Sep 27, 2014 8:23 pm

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jIr5bO_1Tj4&feature=youtu.be

Somebody give Shotoku a cake. He needs more cake in his life for his editing service.

So, this is basically the same thing that happened with Free Verse except I suddenly gained a lot more skill than the skill I gained in Free Verse. I'm so sorry for this. Seriously.



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Re: Crossed the Line

Post by Fauxfyre on Sat Sep 27, 2014 9:29 pm

There's a glitch in the Matrix

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Re: Crossed the Line

Post by [senpai] kevans on Sat Sep 27, 2014 9:33 pm

the fuck happened to this thread am confused
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Re: Crossed the Line

Post by ScrungleBlumpkus on Sat Sep 27, 2014 9:34 pm

Okay now what's even happening I don't understand at all
Votale what have you done

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Re: Crossed the Line

Post by Fauxfyre on Sat Sep 27, 2014 9:38 pm

Somehow Rabid's WCC post is invisible and replaced the first post of this thread, but now it is Votale's music thread post.

During this whole time, it has been the same thread name by Dap, but the actual OP keeps changing and the real OP gets bumped down below it

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Re: Crossed the Line

Post by ScrungleBlumpkus on Sat Sep 27, 2014 9:38 pm


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Re: Crossed the Line

Post by Fauxfyre on Sat Sep 27, 2014 9:49 pm

fixed?

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Re: Crossed the Line

Post by ScrungleBlumpkus on Sat Sep 27, 2014 9:51 pm

Fixed. Very Happy
Except Rabid's WCC post is still missing. Suspicious

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Re: Crossed the Line

Post by Fauxfyre on Sat Sep 27, 2014 9:53 pm

Aaaaaanyways.....

The beginning was really lulzy, but the rest was pretty cool. At the beginning I could tell you still had problems knowing what to keep and what to delete, but near the improvement from beginning to end was probably the biggest I've seen in a single track.

Also, thanks for telling people to give me cake

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Re: Crossed the Line

Post by gaoyubao on Sat Sep 27, 2014 11:02 pm

Is that a 3rd pos foot fling. How?

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Re: Crossed the Line

Post by Opal Rider on Sun Sep 28, 2014 2:30 am

Well I will say that I can't wait to see what else you might be releasing in the near future, and you can definitely feel the improvement, but everyone's mentioned all of that already, so I might as well move on to a few tips for making it better. I feel like there were a few parts thrown in there just for the sake of throwing it in there, with the largest example standing out to me being the 45 snap section that lasted about 5 seconds total. This is a public service announcement, please pay attention, for it will only be repeated once. Not every super woah amazing track has to be an omni. I repeat, not every super woah amazing track has to be an omni. Thank you for your time.

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Re: Crossed the Line

Post by Rafael on Sun Sep 28, 2014 9:05 am

Really entertaining track man. Loved the double hand fling loop, tracks should have more of those :|
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Re: Crossed the Line

Post by ScrungleBlumpkus on Sun Sep 28, 2014 1:35 pm

@Opal Rider wrote:This is a public service announcement, please pay attention, for it will only be repeated once. Not every super woah amazing track has to be an omni. I repeat, not every super woah amazing track has to be an omni.

That's the lesson I finally learned from this track. I'mma keep it in mind.

Also, if 3rd foot pos means above sled, then I'mma try to do it out of fakie sometime.


Thanks, guyzh

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Re: Crossed the Line

Post by Fauxfyre on Sun Sep 28, 2014 2:46 pm

Dapianokid wrote:if 3rd foot pos means above sled, then I'mma try to do it out of fakie sometime.
That's impossible, just so you know

http://iridethelines.forumotion.com/t10575-shotoku-explains-the-quirks-about-quirk
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