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Post by darklight Wed Aug 26, 2009 11:24 pm

from when IRTL was down for the first time, back in around april or may. I never posted it on IRTL, so I guess I can now?



rep is needed and appreciated, seeing as I'm going to start to be active again here.

go here and record my newest track, too.
https://iridethelines.forumotion.com/engaged-riding-f16/need-a-recording-done-t984.htm#14687
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Post by baconat0r Thu Aug 27, 2009 1:03 am

I loved the scenery it was very nice. But it was also detailed in some places and blank in others. when doing splits you should use fade effects in the editing.

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Post by Bubbles Thu Aug 27, 2009 4:12 am

scenery was nice but recording was slowish
good job nonetheless
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Post by Wolf_Spirit Thu Aug 27, 2009 4:14 am

I didn't really like the off-sled ending, but the track was nice, the scenery was great in some parts(those roots) but not in other-blank parts, 7.5/10
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Post by IGotGreasyBalls Thu Aug 27, 2009 8:07 am

Hmm the track was pretty bad actually, sorry to put it like that but you need to work on it. The scenery on the other hand was quite nice. You could try putting in a monument to make it more wow.
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Post by Rafael Thu Aug 27, 2009 11:34 am

split fail 8D

nice stuff, the scenery was sometimes empty, sometimes awesome, try to balance that Wink
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Post by Cereal Thu Aug 27, 2009 4:33 pm

split fail Hehe

anyways, awesome scenery.
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Post by LineRiderGjert Thu Aug 27, 2009 4:43 pm

My old music for SRS 8D Owell, that track has had like 20 songs.

But yeah, I really enjoyed the scenery, some REALLY good moments there Smile Keep scening! We need sceners, and you have alot of potential! You could be the next scenery legend, who knows?

Keep it up!
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Post by Absox Fri Aug 28, 2009 10:27 am

Lol. Ehh, laggy recording, but that's not the biggest issue.

With the track, the flow could use some work; try cutting down on air-time a little bit; always do something with Bosh. Lol, regurgitating advice once given to me by Hedgey...

Damn I feel old.
Pretty cool scenery, had some good stuff in there, but some parts weren't executed the best, I feel.
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Post by redcap Sat Aug 29, 2009 3:01 pm

Absox wrote:Lol. Ehh, laggy recording, but that's not the biggest issue.

With the track, the flow could use some work; try cutting down on air-time a little bit; always do something with Bosh. Lol, regurgitating advice once given to me by Hedgey...

Damn I feel old.
Pretty cool scenery, had some good stuff in there, but some parts weren't executed the best, I feel.

I couldn't have said it better myself. Except I am old.... well, compared to you youngens.

Keep working at it, practice makes perfect, as they say.

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