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Post by Fauxfyre Wed Aug 28, 2013 10:43 pm


Yes I spelled uninspired wrong, deal with it.
Also, so much content, you only get the color playbacks.
And the red one is slowed down a bit to fit the music, that's the only one.

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Post by Opal Rider Wed Aug 28, 2013 10:56 pm

I always thought people just joke about their quirk being that much better than their manuals. Some of the flings were awesome, but you might want ta work on your curves, man.
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Post by Fauxfyre Wed Aug 28, 2013 11:27 pm

what's wrong with my manuals? I honestly can't tell

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Post by Opal Rider Wed Aug 28, 2013 11:34 pm

While you have the idea for curves down pretty well, they just don't look very.... pretty? I guess is the word I'm going for. Sorta awkwardly shaped in places, Especially during the flatsled at the beginning of the first short.
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Post by LineMagiX Thu Aug 29, 2013 2:16 pm

3:07 - Sick

The small manuquirk at 1:58 was really cool too. I like that style a lot. Smile
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Post by OTDE Thu Aug 29, 2013 2:33 pm

I loved the alty-prog stuff. It actually had better flow than some of the flatsleddish stuff, which surprised me. Soon as you make your manuals more consistent overall, you'll be a STAR

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Post by Chuggers Thu Aug 29, 2013 3:05 pm

your fling quirk is very smooth Very Happy
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Post by roflmaoqwerty Thu Aug 29, 2013 7:12 pm

You're dangerously close to HG tier in terms of track completion rate.

But good lord, these were all so awesome. I especially loved the first track's XY section.
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Post by theacp127 Thu Aug 29, 2013 7:33 pm

Nice job, but it is somewhat of a shame that these may never be finished.
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