Just Sip Your Tea
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Just Sip Your Tea
After 5 months of not working on it, I finially present to you "Just Sip Your Tea". To be honest, I think I could have done better, but some of this was made a while ago when I wasn't as good. Anywayz... enjoy it for what it is and don't forget to give me some feedback on what I can do better next time.
theacp127- Member
- trying real hard
Re: Just Sip Your Tea
Lol, kramual recycle ftw. The one thing I could suggest is to try to smooth everything out a bit. I don't know if it's just me, but when I look at a track, I consider it more of an artwork, rather than just a guy on a sled riding lines. Gotta keep that smooth feel in the curves, as well as consistancy in the flings and granuals. Admittedly, this might take some time, but I have a feeling you'll get it eventually.
Opal Rider- Moderator
- Aestetikally appealing
Re: Just Sip Your Tea
Oh mah gawd, those wubs :sweetjesus:
You've got a good basic understanding of a variety of tricks; now work on executing them a bit more cleanly. My advice to you would be to keep the wobble in your bass and out of your manuals. (ucwatididthar) Overall, an entertaining track; keep 'em coming!
You've got a good basic understanding of a variety of tricks; now work on executing them a bit more cleanly. My advice to you would be to keep the wobble in your bass and out of your manuals. (ucwatididthar) Overall, an entertaining track; keep 'em coming!
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