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We Ride the Lines is an Unofficial Line Rider Community Forum, formerly TechDawg's I Ride the Lines.


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Post by Rave Tue Nov 13, 2012 3:35 pm

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nbCTRcfEu6U
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Post by [senpai] kevans Tue Nov 13, 2012 3:37 pm

The only bad thing I can say about this was the direction was pretty lack luster. It felt as though you were trying to pull Bosh one direction, but gave up half way, and went another. Everything else felt pretty decent to me.

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Post by Rave Tue Nov 13, 2012 3:38 pm

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Post by Fauxfyre Tue Nov 13, 2012 3:57 pm

kevansevans wrote:The only bad thing I can say about this was the direction was pretty lack luster. It felt as though you were trying to pull Bosh one direction, but gave up half way, and went another.
I actually liked that about the track.

You could clearly see your flings and gravity wells improve throughout the track. Keep it up, I like your style Thumbs Up

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Post by Rave Tue Nov 13, 2012 3:59 pm

Thank you Inverted Onoz
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Post by shammies Tue Nov 13, 2012 7:25 pm

It was an alright track, but with how some of the stacks looked, I feel there could have been stronger pulls.
Overall, keep improving; you can only go up from this point on.

Or down like me :P
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