Happily Ever After [CC]

I made the track and scenery in 12 days. Let me know what you think.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vdpncnEEdYQ

Recording and editing by CamQuartr which I appreciate very much.

Loved it! Told a subtle story, and I enjoyed the experience, so thanks for that!

Oh my dear mother I think this is my new favorite line rider track. That was simply beautiful.

Like, the scenery in this track is everything that I wish I could do but can't. So artistic and stylistic and simple and elegant and yet so much more moving than any scenery I've ever seen. Seriously, this was sheer eye candy. And OMG the track fit so well and the scenery fit the track and it felt like it was just part of the artwork more than any scenery I've ever seen before.

Seriously, what more proof do I need that Line Rider is an artistic medium than this track?

Anyway, let's see how this stacks up against the criteria. Feels more like a test of the criteria than a test of the track lol...

Ambitious? not really.
Epic factor/Impressive? somewhat
Complete/Cohesive? yes, totally.
Vision? YES
An Experience? YESSS

Quality of art? amazing
Creativity in scening things? good
Speed manipulations? a little. wouldn't have wanted more.
Detail? Two words: WHITE SPACE
Consistency? YES
Unified Theme? YESSSSSS
Originality? Yes times a million in terms of scenery in LR, not so much in terms of your personal scenery.
Speed? perfect

Monument placement? beautiful
Monument usage? none.
3-D (extrusion, adding shine, shading, contour lines, adding depth)? somehow, the depth was present. The lack of the rest was an artistic choice that was excellent.
Made sense? yup
"Hiding" the track? (this is bad) nope.
Good Ending? ehh, not impressive, but fit the track nicely.

You have to make a full track using this style!

It was simply amazing.

Rabid, come down! Really, if this is your new favorite line rider track you missed Mysteria!

Of course this is a typical wonderful CC line rider track I liked the story and the simple but clever way you draw things. But it seemed a little bit rushed in my eyes and you could make it much longer ( I also think the heart thing is a really overused art theme ) Maybe I just feel this way because rabid pushed this track so much

I also liked the transition from leaves to hearts you made and the track! You should made more tracks on your own again

Sssschiller wrote:Rabid, come down! Really, if this is your new favorite line rider track you missed Mysteria!

Of course this is a typical wonderful CC line rider track I liked the story and the simple but clever way you draw things. But it seemed a little bit rushed in my eyes and you could make it much longer ( I also think the heart thing is a really overused art theme ) Maybe I just feel this way because rabid pushed this track so much

I also liked the transition from leaves to hearts you made and the track! You should made more tracks on your own again

I didn't know this existed until now lol

and this is easily better than mysteria what are you smoking

I mean mysteria was more work but it was kind of a hodgepodge and this is like cotton candy for the eyes

I've been spending too much time on tumblr I get excited over everything now lol

Amazing work of art man

please keep doing what you are best at!

Hehe thanks guys. I'd say this track, more than any other I've made, was greatly influenced by how I've been feeling. Which probably explains the hearts as well as the story. I've always wanted to create a story in LR, but I guess I've been too scatter-brained, until recently, to dedicate the whole track to one idea. By the end, I had conflicted feelings that caused part of me to not want to finish it, and then the better part of me reluctantly finished it in time.
I guess I'm saying that, looking back now, it's interesting that had I made this track just a week later it might have been completely different.
Also, this is basically my version of Save the Princess. I loved the idea, but wanted to make it my own (not so sinister; more innocent).

^this track just become even more amazing.

I love your work CC, your tracks always make me feel like scening! =)

Wow, that was so cool. =) It's really impressive how you can make a track look so good even though some curves aren't even fully scened. Keep it up. =3

Commandercoke wrote:I'd say this track, more than any other I've made, was greatly influenced by how I've been feeling.

This isn't a farewell track, is it? Geez, I hope not

Really brings tears to my eyes, thinking of the story it brings with it. Wow.
Amazing CC <3

Commandercoke wrote:Hehe thanks guys. I'd say this track, more than any other I've made, was greatly influenced by how I've been feeling. Which probably explains the hearts as well as the story. I've always wanted to create a story in LR, but I guess I've been too scatter-brained, until recently, to dedicate the whole track to one idea. By the end, I had conflicted feelings that caused part of me to not want to finish it, and then the better part of me reluctantly finished it in time.
I guess I'm saying that, looking back now, it's interesting that had I made this track just a week later it might have been completely different.
Also, this is basically my version of Save the Princess. I loved the idea, but wanted to make it my own (not so sinister; more innocent).

Thanks for sharing, this adds a whole nother layer to it.

Also I totally saw the STP similarities I really loved how you took the idea and made it your own.

The naked part was pretty neat itself, it was has a nice style and it was very flowy. The scenery was nice as usually and very creative too, overall it was a very nice track.

rabid squirrel wrote:Oh my dear mother I think this is my new favorite line rider track. That was simply beautiful.

My thoughts exactly.

The sketch-type scenery is just incredibly clean and fits everything Line Rider is more perfectly than any style of scenery I have ever seen. Imaginary +rep, that's how good it was.

roflmaoqwerty wrote:

Commandercoke wrote:I'd say this track, more than any other I've made, was greatly influenced by how I've been feeling.

This isn't a farewell track, is it? Geez, I hope not

Nope.

Rafael wrote:Really brings tears to my eyes, thinking of the story it brings with it. Wow.
Amazing CC <3

That's what I was hoping for. Thank you. It definitely stirs up some emotions for me.

rabid squirrel wrote:

Commandercoke wrote:Hehe thanks guys. I'd say this track, more than any other I've made, was greatly influenced by how I've been feeling. Which probably explains the hearts as well as the story. I've always wanted to create a story in LR, but I guess I've been too scatter-brained, until recently, to dedicate the whole track to one idea. By the end, I had conflicted feelings that caused part of me to not want to finish it, and then the better part of me reluctantly finished it in time.
I guess I'm saying that, looking back now, it's interesting that had I made this track just a week later it might have been completely different.
Also, this is basically my version of Save the Princess. I loved the idea, but wanted to make it my own (not so sinister; more innocent).

Thanks for sharing, this adds a whole nother layer to it.

Also I totally saw the STP similarities I really loved how you took the idea and made it your own.

Thanks. There's always a story behind the story. ;P

Jam wrote:

rabid squirrel wrote:Oh my dear mother I think this is my new favorite line rider track. That was simply beautiful.

My thoughts exactly.

The sketch-type scenary is just incredibly clean and fits everything Line Rider is more perfectly than any style of scenery I have ever seen. Imaginary +rep, that's how good it was.

I recently realized that the things you don't do are just as important as the things you do. In linerider the lines you don't use are just as important as the lines you do use. Which has really effected my scenery and has given me this new style. Thanks for the +rep.

Awh CC, this is wonderful.
It's simply a beautiful style and the whole atmosphere with the music and what's incuded in the scenery really does make this very emotive (in my opinion at least)
I love this style of scenery, and I'm very tempted to make a response to this and Save the Princess :b ♥

Wolf_Spirit wrote:Awh CC, this is wonderful.
It's simply a beautiful style and the whole atmosphere with the music and what's incuded in the scenery really does make this very emotive (in my opinion at least)
I love this style of scenery, and I'm very tempted to make a response to this and Save the Princess :b

Do it!

Just watched this for the second time, and I don't know why I'm not as impressed as everyone else is. Don't get me wrong, I REALLY liked it, it was awesome and I really like your style. Very wonderful altogether.
9/10
P.S. am I the only one that noticed the heart shape in the bricks at 0:26? I thought that was really cool