Shotoku - Unnoticed

by Fauxfyre Mon Apr 23, 2012 12:01 pm

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nFiie2rCzKU
Please read the video description

EDIT: Due to this Youtube video being blocked in 223 countries, you can download the .wmv video file here if you are having troubles. (~50mb)

by **Opal Rider** Mon Apr 23, 2012 12:16 pm

You. Look at your video. Now look back at me. Back to your video, now back to me.i am now thoroughly convinced that you're SCG trying to troll us. You've been found out. Very Happy

by Pinter Mon Apr 23, 2012 1:37 pm

can't watch it

by Fauxfyre Mon Apr 23, 2012 1:44 pm

Pinter wrote:can't watch it

What the..? It says it's blocked in 223 countries

Do you want me to PM you the wmv file?

by Fauxfyre Mon Apr 23, 2012 2:17 pm

Kramwood wrote:
shotoku wrote:
Pinter wrote:can't watch it
What the..? It says it's blocked in 223 countries
Do you want me to PM you the wmv file?

just edit your first post and put it there that way people with the same problem won't bug you later

Way ahead of you. I just have to get the video onto mediafire and I'm set

by Ph0enix Mon Apr 23, 2012 2:48 pm

Opal Rider wrote:You. Look at your video. Now look back at me. Back to your video, now back to me.i am now thoroughly convinced that you're SCG trying to troll us. You've been found out.

You could be right^.

by Ph0enix Mon Apr 23, 2012 2:48 pm

EDIT: somehow it tried to post what I said twice.

by Inukaza Mon Apr 23, 2012 2:55 pm

This is my opinion and advice: Collab with someone with a higher skill level than you, and you'll reflect that. You are literally on the edge of breaking through to a whole new level, you just got to be invoked by being pitted with someone who's challenging you.

If you collabed with SCG, you'd do a track with less of those unbalanced manuals, and work on your flings, copying how he makes them, improving. Same with manuals if you collabed with cereal.

You learn by collabing, and you're right on the dot to being someone who makes decent track.

Nice job.

by Stallie Mon Apr 23, 2012 3:58 pm

If anything I would say your granuals are pretty good. The thing you need to work on a little bit are those curves, keep making them more smoother and less rough. Your flings are decent as well, but they could use some work as well. So keep on practicing those flings and getting your wells a bit more stronger. Over all I thought you did a really nice job, keep it up. Wink

by SETH Mon Apr 23, 2012 5:03 pm

i can't see your video bro ... emi rights...

by Fauxfyre Mon Apr 23, 2012 5:07 pm

SETH wrote:i can't see your video bro ... emi rights...

I posted a mediafire link with the video at the top of the page. I'm going to stop using copyrighted music

by **Cereal** Mon Apr 23, 2012 5:26 pm

Rainbow Dash wrote:You learn by collabing

Really? I kinda learned myself (and through tutorials)

This reminds me of some old school tracks from riders who ended up being some of the best around. I'd recommend expanding your variety of tracks. For example, XY, compact quirk, manuals, etc.

Most importantly, just have fun with it. Sometimes messing around a bit will get you the best results.