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Post by Bush Tue Aug 04, 2009 11:14 am

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mBUyft1eGS4

YT description:
A two year anniversary track. I hope it inspires more scenery tracks.
One split, with a total of 448 track lines, and around 25,000 total lines.
The track is more than 5 months old.
If you noticed, I Added Some Mini-Tributes scattered among the track.
I'll name a few for now; Sam, Ole, and Ghosty.
There are also many others to thank, but they should know who they are :3
My main inspiration came from Spacial Harmony from the Utopians, where you can see some of the resemblance.
More Owl City? Thanks to GhostY to showing it to me awhile ago.
Hope you enjoyed and Look Forward to the next Dream Installment. It'll be worth it.
Screenies:
1st half: https://imgur.com/DagUd.jpg
2nd half: https://imgur.com/CrDAv.jpg
The 'Ripple': https://imgur.com/Y28kb.jpg
The Hand: https://imgur.com/rgtp2.jpg
Pink Panther: https://imgur.com/8vTpK.jpg
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Post by Linepenguin Tue Aug 04, 2009 2:42 pm

I love it so much I cant stop watching it!!!!!!!
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Post by rabid squirrel Fri Aug 07, 2009 1:21 pm

Haha, that was fun/awesome. Couple questions:
- was there a reason you went with the random style?
- how is that 25,000 lines? It looks like maybe 15k max.

I liked the upbeat and random feel of the scenery, though I did think it was a little too random - it needed some kind of underlying theme. Lots of cool drawings though. The beginning was the best, it looked like a strange sort of cave with lots of stuff in it (like a dream!), but that theme sort of drifted away.

I thought the track was too slow and didn't go very far, at least for a scenery track. It felt kind of like he was floating around a bunch of drawings, which didn't really seem realistic. It needed more speed, and more concrete lines or flings so that the guy could actually look to be riding on something.

Good job, keep scening! Looking forward to more scenery from you.
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Post by Bush Fri Aug 07, 2009 3:27 pm

rabid squirrel wrote:Haha, that was fun/awesome. Couple questions:
- was there a reason you went with the random style? Not really. When I was making it, I didn't really realize it was too random until too late. I did want it abstract from the beginning, but now i realize i went to far. I find serious and realistical sceneing boring and dull (to make, and unless it's done really good, to watch also).
- how is that 25,000 lines? It looks like maybe 15k max. It might be a little less, but it's definitely more than 15k. I'm not exactly sure how, probably from the outline and my obsession with drawing small lines.
Replied in blue. Thanks for the suggestions, I'll keep them in mind in the future.
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Post by Rafael Fri Aug 07, 2009 4:33 pm

I actually really liked this one! Very original!
But the scenery got a but too random when
the pink panther got in xD. Try not to but
letters in your scenery, it looks pretty nooby :P.

Also try to shade a bit more, it makes everything
look better IMO (as long as you don't shade it
too much).

Keep it up! Thumbs Up
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Post by Nubcake Fri Aug 07, 2009 4:43 pm

winning much are we now?? very rememberable track. song was awesome also. very much a win type of track
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Post by Kiwi Mon Aug 10, 2009 7:29 am

Nice job Bush!

I liked how everything was in a cave, all clumped together. But some of the scenery was floating which is bad :|
Also, the track had some good flow.
Keep making these, they're awesome 8D

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Post by Wolf_Spirit Sun Aug 16, 2009 4:50 am

Well I liked the track, but it was riding on the same part for a while then, to a new part then to a new part and so on. This isn't a bad thing, but you need something REALLY impressive drawn at these parts to make it interesting. But I have always liked abstract scenery, very nice 8D
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Post by LineXtech Mon Aug 17, 2009 3:01 pm

i liked the pink pather and other things 8D

abstract scenery FTW
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