Dream Quasar
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Rafael
rabid squirrel
Linepenguin
Bush
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Dream Quasar
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mBUyft1eGS4
YT description:
A two year anniversary track. I hope it inspires more scenery tracks.
One split, with a total of 448 track lines, and around 25,000 total lines.
The track is more than 5 months old.
If you noticed, I Added Some Mini-Tributes scattered among the track.
I'll name a few for now; Sam, Ole, and Ghosty.
There are also many others to thank, but they should know who they are :3
My main inspiration came from Spacial Harmony from the Utopians, where you can see some of the resemblance.
More Owl City? Thanks to GhostY to showing it to me awhile ago.
Hope you enjoyed and Look Forward to the next Dream Installment. It'll be worth it.
Screenies:
1st half: https://imgur.com/DagUd.jpg
2nd half: https://imgur.com/CrDAv.jpg
The 'Ripple': https://imgur.com/Y28kb.jpg
The Hand: https://imgur.com/rgtp2.jpg
Pink Panther: https://imgur.com/8vTpK.jpg
YT description:
A two year anniversary track. I hope it inspires more scenery tracks.
One split, with a total of 448 track lines, and around 25,000 total lines.
The track is more than 5 months old.
If you noticed, I Added Some Mini-Tributes scattered among the track.
I'll name a few for now; Sam, Ole, and Ghosty.
There are also many others to thank, but they should know who they are :3
My main inspiration came from Spacial Harmony from the Utopians, where you can see some of the resemblance.
More Owl City? Thanks to GhostY to showing it to me awhile ago.
Hope you enjoyed and Look Forward to the next Dream Installment. It'll be worth it.
Screenies:
1st half: https://imgur.com/DagUd.jpg
2nd half: https://imgur.com/CrDAv.jpg
The 'Ripple': https://imgur.com/Y28kb.jpg
The Hand: https://imgur.com/rgtp2.jpg
Pink Panther: https://imgur.com/8vTpK.jpg
Bush- Member
Re: Dream Quasar
Haha, that was fun/awesome. Couple questions:
- was there a reason you went with the random style?
- how is that 25,000 lines? It looks like maybe 15k max.
I liked the upbeat and random feel of the scenery, though I did think it was a little too random - it needed some kind of underlying theme. Lots of cool drawings though. The beginning was the best, it looked like a strange sort of cave with lots of stuff in it (like a dream!), but that theme sort of drifted away.
I thought the track was too slow and didn't go very far, at least for a scenery track. It felt kind of like he was floating around a bunch of drawings, which didn't really seem realistic. It needed more speed, and more concrete lines or flings so that the guy could actually look to be riding on something.
Good job, keep scening! Looking forward to more scenery from you.
- was there a reason you went with the random style?
- how is that 25,000 lines? It looks like maybe 15k max.
I liked the upbeat and random feel of the scenery, though I did think it was a little too random - it needed some kind of underlying theme. Lots of cool drawings though. The beginning was the best, it looked like a strange sort of cave with lots of stuff in it (like a dream!), but that theme sort of drifted away.
I thought the track was too slow and didn't go very far, at least for a scenery track. It felt kind of like he was floating around a bunch of drawings, which didn't really seem realistic. It needed more speed, and more concrete lines or flings so that the guy could actually look to be riding on something.
Good job, keep scening! Looking forward to more scenery from you.
Re: Dream Quasar
Replied in blue. Thanks for the suggestions, I'll keep them in mind in the future.rabid squirrel wrote:Haha, that was fun/awesome. Couple questions:
- was there a reason you went with the random style? Not really. When I was making it, I didn't really realize it was too random until too late. I did want it abstract from the beginning, but now i realize i went to far. I find serious and realistical sceneing boring and dull (to make, and unless it's done really good, to watch also).
- how is that 25,000 lines? It looks like maybe 15k max. It might be a little less, but it's definitely more than 15k. I'm not exactly sure how, probably from the outline and my obsession with drawing small lines.
Bush- Member
Re: Dream Quasar
I actually really liked this one! Very original!
But the scenery got a but too random when
the pink panther got in . Try not to but
letters in your scenery, it looks pretty nooby .
Also try to shade a bit more, it makes everything
look better IMO (as long as you don't shade it
too much).
Keep it up!
But the scenery got a but too random when
the pink panther got in . Try not to but
letters in your scenery, it looks pretty nooby .
Also try to shade a bit more, it makes everything
look better IMO (as long as you don't shade it
too much).
Keep it up!
Rafael- Line Rider Legend
Re: Dream Quasar
winning much are we now?? very rememberable track. song was awesome also. very much a win type of track
Nubcake- Member
Re: Dream Quasar
Nice job Bush!
I liked how everything was in a cave, all clumped together. But some of the scenery was floating which is bad
Also, the track had some good flow.
Keep making these, they're awesome
I liked how everything was in a cave, all clumped together. But some of the scenery was floating which is bad
Also, the track had some good flow.
Keep making these, they're awesome
Kiwi- Member
Re: Dream Quasar
Well I liked the track, but it was riding on the same part for a while then, to a new part then to a new part and so on. This isn't a bad thing, but you need something REALLY impressive drawn at these parts to make it interesting. But I have always liked abstract scenery, very nice
Wolf_Spirit- Member
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