Phoenix - By IoneRendar

This is it!
My ultimate short scenery masterpiece.
After months of scening, recording and editing i proudly present "Phoenix"
Thanks to lankher for the epic music!^^
Be happy ;-)

i wubbed it epic waterfall near the end

first?

OMG THAT WAS EPIC
What was the line count!
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yea featued!! great track! errrr scenry! errrr both

that was awesomely random

great track Ione, glad you released it today.

I was entertained throughout, and the huge black part was epic.

I <3 it... other than the fact you're leaving line rider. ;___;

cya....

great track ione, a little short, but still awesome

wow loved it, scenery wasn't concentrated on on place but was spread out, the track also transitioned between the scenery very well, which was admirable, all in all a great track

intense.

Some parts looked a bit odd/perspective was off. The way the 2d mixed with the 3dparts didnt look right sometimes.

Awesome scenery otherwise, some really fantastic scenery in there. You should be proud.

I would go into more detail about what i said earlier but its 12 am and i havent had much sleep all week and im really tire-zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzZZZZZZZZZzz

That awesome Ione! The track could use a little work, but the scenery definitely made up for it. It had a bit of a BHCS feel to it, same with the editing.

Track
The track wasn't anything special, but that didn't matter, this was about the scenery. However, it would have been nice for it to slow down at the appropriate moments, like the waterfall, and it did bug me when he rode on strange things. Sometimes it felt like the scenery was drawn without the track in mind and then the track was attempted to be incorporated, and other times there was just a blatant line through the scenery that kind of took away from the experience.

Scenery
The art was amazing. However, at the beginning it did seem to copy BHCS, and the ending was less than spectacular (I didn't quite understand the button) - I was hoping to see some big cool drawing, as the end is a perfect place for that. Also, the environments and the things being drawn changed so fast it didn't make sense, kind of like MMXT. He falls off a building, down through the sidewalk, and into a farm, and then goes off a jump up into a cave? That didn't make any sense... And I was bugged that you didn't zoom out at some parts (like the flower in the cave, I wanted to see all of it! IMHO, the recording wasn't perfect because of this) And it was a bit short. (I wished it hadn't all gone by so fast)

Ok, but enough of the negativity. The ART was among the best I've seen in line rider - some parts of it are rivaled only by evolution. The waterfall was spectacular, even with the track line through it, and I loved the inverted guy in the cave, and the flower. That alone is enough for a very noteworthy track, and you should be proud of this.

If you make more tracks like this, try to make a cohesive theme, try to design the scenery around the track, and make the best scenery moments at the track's slower parts. And keep up the fabulous drawings! It's good enough that it crossed my mind that you might have used tweakwindow/powermenu (if you didn't, that's a compliment )

Wonderfull job mate .
Your tricks is ok but it's not the most important in your track .
Indeed , the scenery is totally amazing . The black and white inverted part is impressive , your a complet artist .

I loved it! I loved the recording and the scenery was just purely awesome!!

W00T! W00T!

Dude what was the line count on that!? I wish i could scene as great like that. Sadly i cant even draw a smiley face without him being disproportianate, lol. Great track man.

i forgot to ask what program did you use to do your intro?

That was amazing! You legend! I've waited ages to see this! I saw 1k views on youtube??!! wtf? should be 100k! Thought it was epic, right: into the detail!
First part:
The base scenery wasn't so good, but I still liked it, I didn't really notice it 'coz of the awesome stuff in the background, (it's a compliment) at 0:27 those diamond things in the back, well most were perfectly the same sizes, great, but sadly some wern't, but it's just a little detail! At 0:34 I can see that it's like your skyscraper drawing, I thought it was amazing! Also the black curve is a great effect! The butterfly.....THAT, my friend it total TRUE art, it was spectacular because it was perfectly done! The man pushing something was sorta randomly there, but it looked amazing, not enought shadow in the hair though. 0:49 now the waterfall looked really good, somehow you made it not look messy as most people would have done. The tile rock things, were great! A little bit of imaginative and individual bit of scenery there! You had a hell of alot of black parts in that, must have taken some time! The ending was nice, nothing really special but I like the little pheonix logo there! We should collab sometime, overall it was spectacular!

I really like it but what did you use to make the intro? I really wonder how people make awesome intros like those.

Someone torrented the Evolution DVD pack from Andrew Cramer, and don't try to deny it lol because that DVD pack costs $99, and I KNOW you didn't pay that lol.
I think I know the plug-in used for the credits too, you used SureTarget and motion blur, yes?
Either way, REALLY nice track, loved it a lot

scenery was very good at the end and i really liked it but then near the waterfall is when it got sloppy but still a very nice track

7.5/10

thanks guys for C&C!

Well, its out.
This was my last track ever.

My leaving thread.