my new track
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HKay
Yobanjojoe
IGLima
jlflame2000
Tom69
Helios Pavonine
Jam
bibliOly
Stallie
Cereal
CamQuartr
Opal Rider
-Nexus-
Se7eN
SPL4SHZ0N3
KillinTime2792
Derpinator
Wolf_Spirit
Sssschiller
Chuggers
rabid squirrel
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Re: my new track
Right, first thing's first. Very well done on making a new track!
You clearly have improved since your last and it seems as if you have been watching some tutorials too ^^
You had some good tricks in there, good barrel roll near the strat and I liked the jump from headriding to a nose manual. However, your 'curves' weren't really smooth, I think you could easily smoothen them out if you zoomed in a litte more and spent more time on them.
I believe you could try to start adding some manuals into your track too, nose manuals are the easiest to start off with. You can find some nose manual tutorials on youtube pretty easily.
Finally, I LOVED the monument, you obviously have spent quite a lot of time on it and it looks great!
So overall, good track, you're improving ^^ But I think you should add more scenery into your tracks too. Good luck with your next one!
You clearly have improved since your last and it seems as if you have been watching some tutorials too ^^
You had some good tricks in there, good barrel roll near the strat and I liked the jump from headriding to a nose manual. However, your 'curves' weren't really smooth, I think you could easily smoothen them out if you zoomed in a litte more and spent more time on them.
I believe you could try to start adding some manuals into your track too, nose manuals are the easiest to start off with. You can find some nose manual tutorials on youtube pretty easily.
Finally, I LOVED the monument, you obviously have spent quite a lot of time on it and it looks great!
So overall, good track, you're improving ^^ But I think you should add more scenery into your tracks too. Good luck with your next one!
Wolf_Spirit- Member
- Retired Admin
Re: my new track
I was gonna write, WAY too long intro, but then i saw the description
it had explosions in it, awesome track
it had explosions in it, awesome track
Derpinator- Member
Re: my new track
the scenery was even more amazing than techdawg!
liked favorited and +repped
liked favorited and +repped
KillinTime2792- Member
Re: my new track
Wow. I don't know how you did it, but this was amazing. I always liked your style, but this took it to a whole new level. I'm not sure I'll ever do as good as this track...
Opal Rider- Moderator
- Aestetikally appealing
Re: my new track
the g-wells could be stronger, but they were pretty good.
the manuals were really smooth and the recycling was amazing.
that was a pretty solid track, keep it up! Hope to see more from you in the future.
the manuals were really smooth and the recycling was amazing.
that was a pretty solid track, keep it up! Hope to see more from you in the future.
Re: my new track
You're improving.
+rep
EDIT: I am confused as to why this is in rabidjunk...
+rep
EDIT: I am confused as to why this is in rabidjunk...
Cereal- Line Rider Legend
Re: my new track
ROFL, its nice to see that your still active, playing LR, nice job, keep it up.
Stallie- Member
Re: my new track
This should be in the tutorial section.
Also, while watching this in awe, I inadvertently
grinned WAY too much and I think I sprained my cheeks. =/
Thanks Rabid!
Also, while watching this in awe, I inadvertently
grinned WAY too much and I think I sprained my cheeks. =/
Thanks Rabid!
bibliOly- Member
Re: my new track
I feel like the obviously on-purpose mispelling of words was a bit of a swing at one specific member of the community, while the long intro was general satire. If I got the mispelling part right, cool; if not, cool. Had me chuckling throughout the intro and remembering the good old days of Line Rider during the track.
I'd add this to my Exceptional Line Rider playlist... But I don't really have one.
I'd add this to my Exceptional Line Rider playlist... But I don't really have one.
Jam- Member
Re: my new track
I thought someone hacked Rabid's YT and WRTL account
That was cool Rabid, you're definitely improving.
That was cool Rabid, you're definitely improving.
Helios Pavonine- Member
Re: my new track
My first comment in over a year, and I'm incredibly glad it is on this video.
Rabid, you are my idol, and I wish to bear your children.
Rabid, you are my idol, and I wish to bear your children.
Tom69- Member
Re: my new track
I died at "fling recycle"
You got all the concepts of bad editing. Long intro, awkward font, spelling/grammar mistakes and over hyping stuff. Nice work?
Also, you're a monument stealer. You took my sun!
You got all the concepts of bad editing. Long intro, awkward font, spelling/grammar mistakes and over hyping stuff. Nice work?
Also, you're a monument stealer. You took my sun!
IGLima- Member
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Re: my new track
Helios Pavonine wrote:I thought someone hacked Rabid's YT and WRTL account
That was cool Rabid, you're definitely improving.
this lol.
Yobanjojoe- Member
- swag
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