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Post by rabid squirrel Wed Jul 27, 2011 2:48 pm

hi everyone i made this track i hope u like it

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Post by Chuggers Wed Jul 27, 2011 2:55 pm

This track



is best.
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Post by Sssschiller Wed Jul 27, 2011 2:59 pm

i loved the recycling!
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Post by Wolf_Spirit Wed Jul 27, 2011 3:21 pm

Right, first thing's first. Very well done on making a new track!

You clearly have improved since your last and it seems as if you have been watching some tutorials too ^^
You had some good tricks in there, good barrel roll near the strat and I liked the jump from headriding to a nose manual. However, your 'curves' weren't really smooth, I think you could easily smoothen them out if you zoomed in a litte more and spent more time on them.

I believe you could try to start adding some manuals into your track too, nose manuals are the easiest to start off with. You can find some nose manual tutorials on youtube pretty easily.

Finally, I LOVED the monument, you obviously have spent quite a lot of time on it and it looks great!

So overall, good track, you're improving ^^ But I think you should add more scenery into your tracks too. Good luck with your next one!
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Post by Derpinator Wed Jul 27, 2011 3:43 pm

I was gonna write, WAY too long intro, but then i saw the description xD

it had explosions in it, awesome track
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Post by KillinTime2792 Wed Jul 27, 2011 5:19 pm

the scenery was even more amazing than techdawg!

liked favorited and +repped

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Post by SPL4SHZ0N3 Wed Jul 27, 2011 5:27 pm

Feature, this has to be featured.
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Post by Se7eN Wed Jul 27, 2011 5:44 pm

SPL4SHZ0N3 wrote:Feature, this has to be featured.

RABID FOR LEGEND!

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Post by -Nexus- Wed Jul 27, 2011 5:51 pm

I WANT 2 BE UR FRIEND U PWN
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Post by Opal Rider Wed Jul 27, 2011 5:58 pm

Wow. I don't know how you did it, but this was amazing. I always liked your style, but this took it to a whole new level. I'm not sure I'll ever do as good as this track...
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Post by CamQuartr Wed Jul 27, 2011 6:56 pm

the g-wells could be stronger, but they were pretty good.

the manuals were really smooth and the recycling was amazing.

that was a pretty solid track, keep it up! Hope to see more from you in the future.

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Post by Cereal Wed Jul 27, 2011 7:09 pm

You're improving.

+rep

EDIT: I am confused as to why this is in rabidjunk...
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Post by SPL4SHZ0N3 Wed Jul 27, 2011 7:17 pm

Holy crap, fling recycle?! I LOVED THE SLOWMO
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Post by Stallie Wed Jul 27, 2011 8:01 pm

ROFL, its nice to see that your still active, playing LR, nice job, keep it up. Wink
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Post by bibliOly Wed Jul 27, 2011 9:52 pm

This should be in the tutorial section.

Also, while watching this in awe, I inadvertently
grinned WAY too much and I think I sprained my cheeks. =/

Thanks Rabid! :|


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Post by Jam Wed Jul 27, 2011 10:17 pm

I feel like the obviously on-purpose mispelling of words was a bit of a swing at one specific member of the community, while the long intro was general satire. If I got the mispelling part right, cool; if not, cool. Had me chuckling throughout the intro and remembering the good old days of Line Rider during the track.

I'd add this to my Exceptional Line Rider playlist... But I don't really have one.
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Post by Helios Pavonine Thu Jul 28, 2011 7:22 am

I thought someone hacked Rabid's YT and WRTL account xD

That was cool Rabid, you're definitely improving.
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Post by Tom69 Thu Jul 28, 2011 9:46 am

My first comment in over a year, and I'm incredibly glad it is on this video.
Rabid, you are my idol, and I wish to bear your children.
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Post by jlflame2000 Thu Jul 28, 2011 10:46 am

Nice track and awesome recycling my new track 173596
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Post by IGLima Thu Jul 28, 2011 11:02 am

I died at "fling recycle" xD
You got all the concepts of bad editing. Long intro, awkward font, spelling/grammar mistakes and over hyping stuff. Nice work?

Also, you're a monument stealer. :| You took my sun! D:
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Post by Yobanjojoe Fri Jul 29, 2011 2:06 am

Helios Pavonine wrote:I thought someone hacked Rabid's YT and WRTL account xD

That was cool Rabid, you're definitely improving.

this lol.
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Post by HKay Sat Jul 30, 2011 7:03 am

I gotta say that made me laugh! Very Happy

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Post by pure5152 Sat Jul 30, 2011 11:53 pm

hot dang, that fling recycle was awesome o__o
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Post by MartinJulenissen Sun Jul 31, 2011 4:27 am

You´re the genius voice of this generation.
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Post by efrazable Wed Aug 03, 2011 9:56 am

This thread won the entire forum.
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