DarkLight's comeback track.

click here to watch the track!

so the splitting reeeeaaaallly sucked on this one, so I had to improvise, make a boom, and you guys can deal with it. However, the audio on my computer doesn't work (long story), so yeah. Anyways, here's my newest track, after over a year of silence. And sorry, the quality prolly sucks because I don't know how to use the new youtube. whatever.

Rules for watching this track:

1. learn to criticize before you do so
2. don't make any comments about the things I mentioned above, i already know they are flaws, so deal with it.
3. I don't know who made the track, but whoever did, I <3 you, because the first half of it was ossum to scene.
4. when you comment, leave your ego at the door. I don't care who you are, I only care what you have to say.
5. enjoy it or die.

Impressive scenery, however, it looked kind of blank in some spots, and overly detailed in others.

Btw, to have a good split, don't forget the overlap

Love the scenery, but i think the track was more enjoyable.

Still, it's pretty beastly.

darklight wrote:enjoy it or die.

*dies*

...loljk

I really love your scenery style but I think you need to be more consistent in your scenery, and have some kind of theme for tracks instead of just random stuff. For example, cobwebs the size of trees the size of buildings... I think it would have been best to keep the scenery from the start consistent throughout the track. Your tracks always start out looking really awesome and get less so as they go IMO.

Also, why no music or titles or credits? Would have made it much more fun to watch.

Ambitious? Not really
Epic factor/Impressive? Not really
Complete/Cohesive? Not really
Vision? Not really
An Experience? Somewhat

Quality of art? Good
Creativity in scening things? Ok
Speed manipulations? none
Detail? good
Consistency? lacking
Unified Theme? not really
Originality? Great
Speed? good

Monument placement? the city was meh because it went by so fast, but the tree at the end was good
Monument usage? tree house was good. city was not
3-D (extrusion, adding shine, shading, contour lines, adding depth)? a little. maybe could have used more but maybe that's just your style.
Made sense? somewhat
"Hiding" the track? (this is bad) none!
Good Ending? yes

woah sweet recording bro *wink* =D

anyways, I LOVE basic scenery, therefore I really enjoyed the second half of the track. Not that the first wasn't good.
I see a lot of potential dude, I'm looking forward to what you'll be doing in the future! =)

Also, welcome back!

I LOVED the parts you scened, you did it all so smoothly and it looked fantastic ^^ The white parts fit well in some places, not so well in others...
But great work all the same, some amazing artwork in there

great scenery, it's very original and successful

that was pretty sweet.
I loved the parts that were intensely scened, your artwork is awesome!

I did wish there was music but I understand, so no complaints, just wishes.

"4. when you comment, leave your ego at the door."
You have a large enough ego to want to create RULES on what we should do, but don't want to have us display our own? Hypocrite.

Anyway, lack of consistency kinda ruined it. The more detailed parts were great though. =)

Jam wrote:"4. when you comment, leave your ego at the door."
You have a large enough ego to want to create RULES on what we should do, but don't want to have us display our own? Hypocrite.

I made that rule because of people like you. nice try though. and please don't comment again, I don't want another thread of your useless arguments. anybody here can tell you why I made that rule.

darklight wrote:

Jam wrote:"4. when you comment, leave your ego at the door."
You have a large enough ego to want to create RULES on what we should do, but don't want to have us display our own? Hypocrite.

I made that rule because of people like you. nice try though. and please don't comment again, I don't want another thread of your useless arguments. anybody here can tell you why I made that rule.

I can. It's because you can't take blunt criticism, so you brand people who give it as egotists.

Inability to take harsh criticism usually is because of a swollen ego...

i didnt understand a lot of words from that ^

sweet track, it was really nice

ohaider

Good Job, man! i Really enjoyed it! U have cool way to draw things (the plants for example). I also don't care about the blank spots because u can see bosh very good and the quality of your scenery is pretty good! Maybe u should zoom in next time and add some music
ah, and enter Laotw with the treehouse!!

Rapto wrote:i didnt understand a lot of words from that ^

you know, there's this really cool thing called www.dictionary.com - you type in a word and it tells you what it means!