learning the ropes

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Bs8FQXM7Zqc

Dont really care bout this, not one of the three tracks i talked about earlier, just as on my laptop and idk where i came from... i might finish it one day but i just slapped a dirty stall at the end and said here. still though feedback would be nice since i may get one small thing out of it. name came from what it was called on my laptop lol.

edit: ooooo credits fail!

You have improved quite a alot in gwells. The flings are starting to look more and more well shaped. However the manuals were uneven and rather unbalanced. They seemed rushed. And also do not do tricks such as the one in 0:41 they aren't to pleasing to the eye. I'd recommend making a manual track to practice your manuals. Place each line and try to get them balance just right. Be sure not to do any 2 pegged tail manuals. Great job, keep up the good work.

i really liked it

it had great flow, you also are very good at gwells :3

the only thing you need to work on is to make your manuals longer, otherwise i enjoyed it ^^

ty both manuals, got it.