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Post by Vermillion Sun Jan 16, 2011 8:35 pm

Recording and editing was done by OTDE.



This is my first anniversary track!
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Post by Cereal Sun Jan 16, 2011 9:12 pm

Happy 1 year anniversary, and welcome to wrtl! Smile

I actual kinda like your style, it was pretty entertaining. There were some sweet recycles.

One tip I have that will make your tracks look better is to try and pressure your manuals more.

Hope to see more tracks from you. :P

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Post by Vermillion Sun Jan 16, 2011 9:25 pm

that means a lot comin from you cereal. you and georgio are my two main inspirations for manualing.
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Post by Sheldon Sun Jan 16, 2011 10:18 pm

Very Nice..... Good Job for being here only one year Thumbs Up As Cereal said pressure manuals. Btw Im 1001lool
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Post by linerage Sun Jan 16, 2011 10:34 pm

brilliantly composed my good friend. I furtherly enjoyed your recycling, although your flings can be improved.

And congrats on your anniversary ^.^ b
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Post by Lukking Mon Jan 17, 2011 2:05 am

very good for ur first anniversary...but you have to work on your manual-pressure and balance.the curves were smooth enough ^^
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Post by Derpinator Mon Jan 17, 2011 3:26 am

the intro were cool xD
Nice track, it had a nice part with recycling...
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Post by Wizzy Mon Jan 17, 2011 4:01 am

Very nice. I wasn't expecting a lot of the stuff in there to happen so I was pleasantly surprised. Excellent job!
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