Show Off by PrinterFind (Aaaand a bit help by Rafael)

Well, My third track, and as it says, i got a bit help from Rafael<.<
And thanks to Georg, ghosty, camquatr and Rapto and of course Rafael

Ok, I was REALLY impressed.
Everything in this track, was a new trick for you (i guess), but it got pulled off really good actually
Those granuals were enjoyable and it made it feel better because the g-wells was so close to each other. Probably a personal thing, but I like it

That highspeed...

Some things to improve on:
1. The manuals pressure
2. Flings

Rapto don't talk about flings, you know i'll pwn you (sarcasm)

^ Well that was not nice.

I do agree, flings are a major downside for you.

Andrew wrote:^ Well that was not nice.

I do agree, flings are a major downside for you.

We talked earlier today, and if you heard us, you would understand what he meant

Rapto, i will still pwn you at flings :0 Remember the totally crap fling i made one day, it will rule the world

Aww, young love.

Smitsy wrote:Aww, young love.

Indeed

nice nice

i've pretty much told you all my thoughts, just work on flings and stuff more

(and dat barrel rolls)

i think my barrel rolls kinda suck <.<

It's great seeing some highspeed by you. Great job for your third track! My third track was like.. >9000 times worse

One day i'll beat you raf :p

i learn things fast^^

Great track and I see improvements ^^

Thing to work on:

- Flings/quirks

- Manual pressure

- Smoothness

- delete unnecessary lines that dont attach bosh

Can't wait for the next one

i'll remember that kitteh

Nice

Rafael wrote:My third track was like.. >9000 times worse

also, you don't have to respond to every single post immediately after it's posted.

rabid squirrel wrote:

Rafael wrote:My third track was like.. >9000 times worse

also, you don't have to respond to every single post immediately after it's posted.

woot??

Man, you are learning fast. Had some nice granuals, and I liked some of the barrel rolls.

Try to have smoother curves with more pressured manuals now. Try to avoid having wobbly manuals as well.

But seriously, 3rd track? It took me about 20 tracks to actually start using simple nose manuals.

some of the lines weren't needed, but that was a huge jaw drop, to see that you can do tail manuals on your third track ^_^ keep it up! you're probably doing better than i was when I had my third track

cool track bro. cool. track.

Wow, Thanks everybody^^

looking to your second track, this is 1000x better... how did you improve so fast?

linerage wrote:looking to your second track, this is 1000x better... how did you improve so fast?

Ask Raf, ghosty, rapto, camquatr and georg they were great help. they gave me tips to the granuals, manuals and so on