Video for school project

This was for a school project. It is an introduction followed by a full track. (Yes, the track is speeded up, I had a LOT of problems recording it and I had very little time to do so.) Enjoy!

I can't see how you can get anything better then a "D" for this.

I'm not saying anything about the actual track - because I'm sure you're not getting graded on that. But the editing sucks, and the popup was annoying. You should have redone it.


Again, if this is a school project, you failed.

Andrew wrote:I can't see how you can get anything better then a "D" for this.

I'm not saying anything about the actual track - because I'm sure you're not getting graded on that. But the editing sucks, and the popup was annoying. You should have redone it.


Again, if this is a school project, you failed.

^this

What class was this for anyways?

The track didn't really flow...but you're still new to this and the scenery could use some help plus the whole track wasn't scened

~rawr wrote:

Andrew wrote:I can't see how you can get anything better then a "D" for this.

I'm not saying anything about the actual track - because I'm sure you're not getting graded on that. But the editing sucks, and the popup was annoying. You should have redone it.


Again, if this is a school project, you failed.

^this

What class was this for anyways?

The track didn't really flow...but you're still new to this and the scenery could use some help plus the whole track wasn't scened

^this, but i was pleasantly surprise by how good you are on your first tries.

whole track wasn't scened probably because his school had a due date on the video?

anyway gonna say the recording was mostly smooth but the editing needs alot of work.

and about the track. pretty good given short notice and first tries. try to use a few more manuals.

That's a horrible school project entry. People who know nothing about LR will just be like "WTF is this?".

The recording and editing just reeks with laziness.

As for the track/scenery it looks very empty and quickly done without bothering to make curves smooth or make real, full scenery.

You'll need to put a little more effort into it if you want to make it worthwhile.

its good that your starting to make tracks and you should keep on making them but dont use them for school projects yet maybe when you get better

i dunno, i thoguht 2:02 was pretty damn cool.

Ktk wrote:i dunno, i thoguht 2:02 was pretty damn cool.

^this

It was pretty cool, it was better near 1:50 though ^^ Keep making tracks!
Buut don't use them for school ;D

Argh, all the annoying things reall... you've heard it already.

For the track: I kind of liked it You've got some creative moments, which kept me from navigating away from the site. I think you've got potential

idon't understand the first part of the vid, and the second part is finish or not ?

This video was a project for my spectra class. I talked during the first part to explain what linerider was, and then the second part was my track. I did this in a week (yes, school deadline). My requirement for my second track was to replicate the styles seen in other tracks while using a few of my own. This, and the lack of time, was the reason the entire track was not scened- I had to incorporate elements from unscened tracks. As for the recording, that was the first time I had ever recorded a video. I had a lot of problems, and those were the best two recordings that I could get. I know it's not great, but I think I did the best I could with the time I had.